For all the PUNJABIS

[rajdeep]

dear all,
this forum for punjabis to share ideas on immigration seems to be a KAVI DARBAR,
It is no more a immigartion forum, all are requested not to promote this third class shairi.
aao koshish kariye ke kush serious galan discuss kariye immigartion bare.

Its name shopuld be changed to <KAVI DRABAR FOR ALL PUNJABIS>

Best of luck to all.

Who the hell you to say third class shayiri,do you know anything about poetry ?and do you have any idea about my poetry ,if you dont want to read ,then leave the forum, and for your kind information i want to tell u there are a number of threads to talk about serious matters , who said you to come in this thread .these r the realities of life , and life does not move with your likes and dislikes ,
i know what r u going to do in canada ? vesse v HEERE DI PEHCHAN JOHRI NU HI HUNDI HAI ,GHUMYAAR NU HEERA LABH GAYA C TE OHNE GADHE DE GAL VICH PA DITTA C ,koi gall nhi tera level hi ena ku hai, tere vass di gall nhi .
baaki saare forum members de tan visas lag gaye ne ,sab ja rhe ne, te sab enjoy hi kar rhe ne is forum ch ,tusi koi serious gall karni hai tan hor thread shuru kr lavo ,naale apna subaah har thaan show nhi kar dayida ,juttiyan hi paindiyan ne,naale tu VADHIYAN den to bina ki serious matter discuss kita hai forum te ,doosre nu tan kaho koi gall j khud kuj chaj da kita hove ,te naale tu na kar promote meri poetry nu ,tu v la lai jor te mere khilaaf ik thread chla de ,fer kar lavi rooh khush ,te naale eh forum koi chat box nhi hai k tusi jo marji boli javo , ethe koi v person apne vichar likh sakda
te tusi hunde kaun ho kise nu third class kehn vaale .pehlan apni peeri thalle sotti fer lavo,

092120 verge MUNNI BADNAAM te nachde vekhe ne
shayri da ghar door ehna ton
eh be-akliyan gallan te hasde vekhe ne

 

[singh092120]

22ji if u are such a big star poet (as u proclaim to be)
then what are you doing in this forum,
go and publish ur book of shairi rather than making this thread a kavi darbar,
dont use this thread (meant to discuss immigartion issues) just to vent out ur emotions.
do not shower ur frustrarion in this forum.

good luck for publishing ur shairi (if u happen to get apublisher)

 

[rajdeep]

i don't want to say these things but jad paani sir to langh jaave tan ena ku tan banhda hai , meri gall nhi ,main kuj rachnaava SHIV diyan payiyan c ,j oh v third class ne tan fir punjab ch bacheya ki .ik singh092120 hi reh gaya first class

ਤੇਰਾ ਵਸਦਾ ਰਹੇ ਪੰਜਾਬ
ਓ ਸ਼ੇਰਾ ਜਾਗ
ਓ ਜੱਟਾ ਜਾਗ
ਅੱਗ ਲਾਉਣ ਕੋਈ ਤੇਰੇ ਗਿੱਧਿਆ ਨੂੰ ਆ ਗਿਆ
ਸੱਪਾਂ ਦੀਆ ਪੀਘਾਂ ਤੇਰੇ ਪਿੱਪਲਾ 'ਤੇ ਪਾ ਗਿਆ
ਤਿੰਰਝਣਾਂ 'ਚ ਕੱਤਦੀ ਦਾ ਰੂਪ ਕੋਈ ਖਾ ਗਿਆ
ਤੇਰੇ ਵਿਹੜੇ ਵਿਚ ਫਿਰਦੇ ਨੇ ਨਾਗ
ਓ ਸ਼ੇਰਾ ਜਾਗ
ਓ ਜੱਟਾ ਜਾਗ
ਤੇਰਾ ਵਸਦਾ ਰਹੇ ਪੰਜਾਬ
eh SHIV di rachna hai ,te ehnu eh janab third class keh rhe ne , shame on him

 

[rajdeep]

22ji if u are such a big star poet (as u proclaim to be)
then what are you doing in this forum,
go and publish ur book of shairi rather than making this thread a kavi darbar,
dont use this thread (meant to discuss immigartion issues) just to vent out ur emotions.
do not shower ur frustrarion in this forum.

good luck for publishing ur shairi (if u happen to get apublisher)

no need to advise me , its ur jealousy ,i know that

 

[singh092120]

i don't want to say these things but jad paani sir to langh jaave tan ena ku tan banhda hai , meri gall nhi ,main kuj rachnaava SHIV diyan payiyan c ,j oh v third class ne tan fir punjab ch bacheya ki .ik singh092120 hi reh gaya first class

ਤੇਰਾ ਵਸਦਾ ਰਹੇ ਪੰਜਾਬ
ਓ ਸ਼ੇਰਾ ਜਾਗ
ਓ ਜੱਟਾ ਜਾਗ
ਅੱਗ ਲਾਉਣ ਕੋਈ ਤੇਰੇ ਗਿੱਧਿਆ ਨੂੰ ਆ ਗਿਆ
ਸੱਪਾਂ ਦੀਆ ਪੀਘਾਂ ਤੇਰੇ ਪਿੱਪਲਾ 'ਤੇ ਪਾ ਗਿਆ
ਤਿੰਰਝਣਾਂ 'ਚ ਕੱਤਦੀ ਦਾ ਰੂਪ ਕੋਈ ਖਾ ਗਿਆ
ਤੇਰੇ ਵਿਹੜੇ ਵਿਚ ਫਿਰਦੇ ਨੇ ਨਾਗ
ਓ ਸ਼ੇਰਾ ਜਾਗ
ਓ ਜੱਟਾ ਜਾਗ
ਤੇਰਾ ਵਸਦਾ ਰਹੇ ਪੰਜਾਬ
eh SHIV di rachna hai ,te ehnu eh janab third class keh rhe ne , shame on him

do not try to take sympathy by quoting the shairi of LEGENDARY SHIV,
je exaple hi deni c te koi apni original te dinde 22ji,

 

[rajdeep]

do not try to take sympathy by quoting the shairi of LEGENDARY SHIV,
je exaple hi deni c te koi apni original te dinde 22ji,

i do not need any sympathy ,oh v tere varge bevkoofa di ,naale sympathy di tan tainu lor hai , i know what i m , naale mainu example den di lorh nhi saari forum bhari payi hai jitho ji karda hai parh lai

 

[singh092120]

now i got it, all the shairi u r quoting on this thread is stolen one.

amazing man,

 

[rajdeep]

now i got it, all the shairi u r quoting on this thread is stolen one.

amazing man,

jado bande nu koi gall na aave tan tere vaangu ron lag jaande ne ,te tere bina saari duniyaa hi chor hai tu ik reh gaya SATEYAVAADI HARISH CHANDER ,

 

[singh092120]

jado bande nu koi gall na aave tan tere vaangu ron lag jaande ne ,te tere bina saari duniyaa hi chor hai tu ik reh gaya SATEYAVAADI HARISH CHANDER ,

Do not forget to mention the shairi books published by you....

THE GREAT KAVI OF THIS CENTURY KAVIRAJ RAJDEEP...

 

[rajdeep]

Do not forget to mention the shairi books published by you....

THE GREAT KAVI OF THIS CENTURY KAVIRAJ RAJDEEP...

i will not forget to write poems on THE GREAT JEALOUS PERSONS OF THE FORUM ,
changa hoyea tu mil gaya , vese tan main kde gall dil nhi launda , per tu hun shereya hai tan ,tera kheyaal khaas taor te rakhanga ,

 

[bestpal]

@ rajdeep,

22g Tusi ek umdaa poet ho esdeych koi shaque nahin. Kavi saare bahut zyaada emotional hunde han, eh gal vi bahut hi sachi hain. Par tussi dil diyan kadvahat ess forum tey kyon kadna chaunde ho? Sirf ese liye ki thodeey brother ne Canada jaa ke taunu bhula ditta? Jis tarh ek veerne kiha c ki saari ungliyaan ek jehih nahin hundi us tarah saare bande jo Canada jaandey vastey prarthana tey ardaas kardey ney, unhaan nu tussi kyon negatives gallan likhi jaande ho? Eh Gal tah vaakayee maadi hai. Jis tarah tussi keha c capt Qorax nu when he wrote that it snowed in Toronto (his first snow), andaaza lagaao ki o kinne khush c aur tussi likhya ki "what is so great if it snowed in Toronto"? Capt Qorax bahut hi nek aur har dil aziz Insaan hain, veere. Main onha nun mil chuka han, Tussi apni bitterness de kaaran zindagi da lutf lena vi bhul gaye? na hi tussi khush ho rahe dusre di khushiyaan dekh kar? YOU REALLY NEED TO CHANGE YOUR PERSPECTIVE OF YOUR LIFE VERY QUICKLY OTHERWISE THE RESULTS WILL BE VERY DISASTROUS. Zindagi bahut hi haseen hai esda mazaa ley kar dekho positives akkhaan naal.
I know that you have not applied for Canada nor you intend to. But that is your personal matter. I just want to wish you Luck.

Yaara, tussi tey saare veera naal panga layi jaande hon. Assi saare bhravan ne aithey. Jado thoda dil udaas hove taan tussi Shri Japp ji da paath ya fer shri Geeta ji da paath kar liya karon ya Shri Sunderkhand d apaath kar liya karon . Man nu bahut shanti milungi. I am trying to tell you all this as an elder brother, and I know that I have seen more in life than you. Waise bhi Tussi mere India dey bandey ho, Mere Punjaab dey Sher ho, Mere Moge tey puttar ho. Be positive and try to do at least One good work (or more) each day, Prabhu dey khaatir. Promise? Be a good boy.


@ singh092120 and others,

Veer ji. Please try to forget this ugly chapter from here. And let us write and share something which will help us all and will be useful and constructive for a better life for all of us. I am really sorry and regret for whatever unpleasant was written about each other.

Best Wishes,

Bestpal

 

[rajdeep]

ਚੰਦਰੀ ਜਵਾਨੀ ਅੱਗ ਲਾ ਦੇਣੀ ਏ
ਸਾਂਭੀ ਨਹੀ ਜਾਂਦੀ ਚੁੱਲੇ ਪਾ ਦੇਣੀ ਏ

ਹੁਣ ਤਾਂ ਬਲੌਰੀ ਨੈਣ ਰਹੇ ਟੋਲਦੀ,
ਹੀਰਿਆਂ ਜਿਹੇ ਦਿਲ ਪੈਰਾਂ ਵਿੱਚ ਰੋਲਦੀ,
ਹੁਣ ਇਹਦੇ ਗਲ ਫਾਹੀ ਪਾ ਦੇਣੀ ਏ
ਚੰਦਰੀ ਜਵਾਨੀ ਅੱਗ ਲਾ ਦੇਣੀ ਏ..
ਸਾਂਭੀ ਨਹੀ ਜਾਂਦੀ ਚੁੱਲੇ ਪਾ ਦੇਣੀ ਏ...

ਤੁਰੀ ਜਾਂਦੀ ਪੈਰਾਂ ਨਾ ਪਤਾਸੇ ਭੋਰਦੀ,
ਸੁਣਦੀ ਛਣਕ ਝਾਂਜਰਾਂ ਦੇ ਬੋਰ ਦੀ
ਇਹਨਾਂ ਗੱਲਾ ਸੂਲੀ ਤੇ ਖੜਾ ਦੇਣੀ ਏ
ਚੰਦਰੀ ਜਵਾਨੀ ਅੱਗ ਲਾ ਦੇਣੀ ਏ
ਸਾਂਭੀ ਨਹੀ ਜਾਂਦੀ ਚੁੱਲੇ ਪਾ ਦੇਣੀ ਏ

ਘੋੜੀਆਂ ਦੀ ਸ਼ੌਕੀ,ਨਾਲੇ ਲੰਡੀ ਜੀਪ ਦੀ,
ਲਾ ਲੈਂਦੀ ਬਾਜੀ ਕਦੇ ਕਦੇ ਸੀਪ ਦੀ,
ਇਸ਼ਕੇ ਦੀ ਅੱਗ ਹੱਡੀਂ ਲਾ ਦੇਣੀ ਏ
ਚੰਦਰੀ ਜਵਾਨੀ ਅੱਗ ਲਾ ਦੇਣੀ ਏ
ਸਾਂਭੀ ਨਹੀ ਜਾਂਦੀ ਚੁੱਲੇ ਪਾ ਦੇਣੀ ਏ

ਲੱਕਿਆਂ ਕਬੂਤਰਾਂ ਦੇ ਵਾਂਗ ਨੱਚਦੀ
ਕਰੇ ਕੀ,ਨਾ ਗੱਲ ਉਹਦੇ ਰਹੀ ਵੱਸ ਦੀ
ਫੜ ਕਿਸੇ ਪਿੰਜਰੇ 'ਚ ਪਾ ਦੇਣੀ ਏ
ਚੰਦਰੀ ਜਵਾਨੀ ਅੱਗ ਲਾ ਦੇਣੀ ਏ
ਸਾਂਭੀ ਨਹੀ ਜਾਂਦੀ ਚੁੱਲੇ ਪਾ ਦੇਣੀ ਏ

 

[Naavy100]

An eagle's egg was placed in the nest of a prairie chicken . The egg hathced and the little eagle grew up thinking it was prairie chicken . The eagle did what the prairie chickens did . It scrached the dirt for seeds . It clucked and cackled . It never flew more than few feet becuase this is what the prairie chickens did . One day he saw an eagle flying gracefully and majestically in the open sky . He asked the prairie chickens "What is that beautiful bird ?" The chickens replied that "this is an eagle. He is an outstanding bird,but you cannot fly like him because you are just a prairie chicken". So the eagle never gave it a second thought, believing that to be the truth. He lived the life of and died a prairie chicken,

What a waste ! He was born to win but consolidated to loose

The same thing is true for most people . If you want to soar like an eagle , you have to learn the ways of an eagle.

Source: You can win (Shiv khera )

@All
I did my medicals today and have sent the passports . Rajdeep bai ji ... main thodi harr oh shayri enjoy karda jedi Canada de favour ch hovey . main kalla ni ...ere wife v kade kade intrrest nal sunde ne .

@Singh
Apa ethe immigration related issues v discuss karde haa .....but waiting de time ch j thodi bohot shyri ho jaye ta koi galat gal nai ....hor sunao medical kithey tak ponche ? ...tyari kidan chaldi ? .

 

[hunker]

An eagle's egg was placed in the nest of a prairie chicken . The egg hathced and the little eagle grew up thinking it was prairie chicken . The eagle did what the prairie chickens did . It scrached the dirt for seeds . It clucked and cackled . It never flew more than few feet becuase this is what the prairie chickens did . One day he saw an eagle flying gracefully and majestically in the open sky . He asked the prairie chickens "What is that beautiful bird ?" The chickens replied that "this is an eagle. He is an outstanding bird,but you cannot fly like him because you are just a prairie chicken". So the eagle never gave it a second thought, believing that to be the truth. He lived the life of and died a prairie chicken,

What a waste ! He was born to win but consolidated to loose

The same thing is true for most people . If you want to soar like an eagle , you have to learn the ways of an eagle.

Source: You can win (Shiv khera )

@ All
I did my medicals today and have sent the passports . Rajdeep bai ji ... main thodi harr oh shayri enjoy karda jedi Canada de favour ch hovey . main kalla ni ...ere wife v kade kade intrrest nal sunde ne .

@ Singh
Apa ethe immigration related issues v discuss karde haa .....but waiting de time ch j thodi bohot shyri ho jaye ta koi galat gal nai ....hor sunao medical kithey tak ponche ? ...tyari kidan chaldi ? .

GOOD veer G,MEDS da panga khatam.
Be an eagle !! 8) 8)

 

[Naavy100]

GOOD veer G,MEDS da panga khatam.
Be an eagle !! 8) 8)

aaj main status dekhya us vicho more surname v hata ditta hai ....now they are using singh as mu last name