Can Someone please review my SOP?

[sahilk]

Please review my SOP. See it here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AdobirSrHKlw9qxB1iCNtUNiCcWBnT6ssICTWNymNyo/edit?pli=1
Need honest review please!

 

[Rohin Roy Dheer]

bro if this sop is same...the one you sent at the time of admission in uni????

 

[sahilk]

bro if this sop is same...the one you sent at the time of admission in uni????

No. I have submitted different SOP for college and for visa

 

[OCEANDRIVE]

hi
it's hard to convince anyone let alone the VO that you have drafted this SOP personally
since your IELTS score is 6.5.
it seems like you have joined bits and pieces from a bunch of pre-written SOP's

no hard feelings, just the way I look at it

 

[Lize]

I just feel that this thing called SOP is useless, If I were a visa officer , I would not like to read all that text, furthermore I think your SOP is fine , just some minor grammatical issues , but overall is good.

 

[sahilk]

hi
it's hard to convince anyone let alone the VO that you have drafted this SOP personally
since your IELTS score is 6.5.
it seems like you have joined bits and pieces from a bunch of pre-written SOP's

no hard feelings, just the way I look at it

Thanks for replying !

I just feel that this thing called SOP is useless, If I were a visa officer , I would not like to read all that text, furthermore I think your SOP is fine , just some minor grammatical issues , but overall is good.

Thanks for replying !

 

[UmairHashmi]

It would be better if you make headings in your SOP and answer the following questions.

Headings:

- Introduction
- Professional & Educational Background
- Why I will return after completing my studies?
- Why I have chosen (Course Name)?
- Why I have chosen Canada?
- Why I have chosen (College/Uni Name)?
- My Travel History