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Jaishkumar

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Myself Jaish.....I m from Anand Vidyanagar Gujrat....
.My profile...
10th(CBSE)= 60%
12th(cbse)= 68%
Bsc nursing in aug 2015 = 59%
IELTS = 6.5 BAND (L=7,S=6.5, R= 6, w= 5.5)

No gap .....2015 to 2016 Aug job as lecturer and 2016aug to Feb 2017 job in another institute as nusing tutor.I applied *NO GAP*.....*NO BACKLOG*
... applied in Lambton college
ADVANCED HEALTHCARE LEADERSHIP course (PG course)
PG certificate 2year course
Got 2 time rejection
Same reason they mention "OTHER REASON"
"OTHER REASON"

GIC fees paid
First semester fees paid
Fund shows of 7.30 lack
Father army retired gov job in bank security guard...
...
That's my profile
 

skape7

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Myself Jaish.....I m from Anand Vidyanagar Gujrat....
.My profile...
10th(CBSE)= 60%
12th(cbse)= 68%
Bsc nursing in aug 2015 = 59%
IELTS = 6.5 BAND (L=7,S=6.5, R= 6, w= 5.5)

No gap .....2015 to 2016 Aug job as lecturer and 2016aug to Feb 2017 job in another institute as nusing tutor.I applied *NO GAP*.....*NO BACKLOG*
... applied in Lambton college
ADVANCED HEALTHCARE LEADERSHIP course (PG course)
PG certificate 2year course
Got 2 time rejection
Same reason they mention "OTHER REASON"
"OTHER REASON"

GIC fees paid
First semester fees paid
Fund shows of 7.30 lack
Father army retired gov job in bank security guard...
...
That's my profile
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Sorry to hear about your rejection Jaish.
I am assuming you are applying for the Fall intake in Sept 2017, you should IMMEDIATELY apply for CAIPS/ GCMS notes to understand the exact reason for the Visa offer to reject your visa twice. Don't waste even one single day.

Relevance of the course with your previous studies should not be an issue. Your grades are average, but also do not seem to be the problem. Please reconfirm that the 7.5 lacs is enough to cover the second term fees along with your lifestyle, books, travel and settlement costs. What did you show as proof of ties to homecountry?
Getting the CAIPS notes will take approx. Four weeks. If you can fix the issue raised in the notes, you can apply one last time with the best chance of success.
 
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good boy

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Get Caips, address mentioned issues.
Prove you are a bona-fide student (strong SOP relating past job/education with proposed program, pay 1st semester tuition fees)
Show strong ties to home country ( family member/ business/ job prospect/ property)
 

Jaishkumar

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Apr 24, 2017
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Sorry to hear about your rejection Jaish.
I am assuming you are applying for the Fall intake in Sept 2017, you should IMMEDIATELY apply for CAIPS/ GCMS notes to understand the exact reason for the Visa offer to reject your visa twice. Don't waste even one single day.

Relevance of the course with your previous studies should not be an issue. Your grades are average, but also do not seem to be the problem. Please reconfirm that the 7.5 lacs is enough to cover the second term fees along with your lifestyle, books, travel and settlement costs. What did you show as proof of ties to homecountry?
Getting the CAIPS notes will take approx. Four weeks. If you can fix the issue raised in the notes, you can apply one last time with the best chance of success.
Yes bro...... I have already applied for CAIPS report on 4th may ...and I have change the course and college to.
I have selected diploma course now DEVELOPMENTAL SERVICE WORKER which is more relavent course.


I m to assuming the fund shows is low . Atleast 12-15 lack ...is appropriate and my SOP is very poor ...I will post here my SOP you can judge bro.... frustrating but ...
Now not blindly i apply.....after CAIPS report I m going to apply
 

Jaishkumar

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Apr 24, 2017
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This is my SOP bro....which my counsltancy have made I think they have not better convincingly mention that stuff ...to satisfy the visa officer what you say ...frnd please reply your opinions...which is valuable for me br




Statement of Purpose

I am Jaishkumar Laljibhai Prajapati from Anand, Gujarat, India. I have successfully completed Bachelors of Nursing with 59% in 2015 from Government College of Nursing; Bhavnagar affiliated to Maharaja Krishnakumarsinhji, Bhavnagar University. During my bachelors, I have studied various aspects of Nursing, which developed my interest In Healthcare and Leadership. Thus, with a view upgrading myself and expanding my knowledge in the field of Healthcare and Leadership, I decided to pursue a Post Graduate Program Advanced Health Care Leadership offered by Lambton College, Canada. This Ontario College Graduate Certificate program course prepares me for emerging leadership roles within health care settings.
In this Advanced Healthcare Leadership Program, I will be able to integrate patient and family care theories into current practices which are responsive for a variety of cultures, behaviours, situations and environments. Moreover, the core concepts of leadership, quality, respect, dignity, partnership, shared decision-making, privacy and confidentiality and improvements to patient safety are explored to achieve enhanced patient outcomes. I will be able to apply professional leadership concepts as a member of a multi-disciplinary health care team in an organization. Besides that, the coursework also discusses family engagement, cultural considerations, and communication strategies in the healthcare environment. I will be able to learn about Systems Thinking, understanding of Error Theories, Human Factors, Leadership and Negotiation Skills, Strategic Planning, Leadership Culture and Accountability, and advanced coaching practices.
Leadership Communication, Collaboration and Relationships, Collaborative Communication are at the foundation of effective engagement, peak performance and revolutionary outcomes. I will learn about creating the context for collaboration, Open and Skillful Dialogue, Creative Problem Solving and Effective Coordination are essential leadership skills in today's workplace. At present, an estimated 100,000 people occupy health management positions at numerous organizational levels, from department head to chief executive officer. I will learn the benefits and impact of collaboration and apply new concepts as they practice engaging in collaborative communication.
Upon completion of this program, I will have a variety of career opportunities as a Medical Staff Relations Officer, Planning and Development Manager, Marketing and Public Affairs Department and so on.
This program will give me international exposure which will make my curriculum vitae stronger. I must say this opportunity will be life defining.

Jaishkumar Laljibhai Prajapati
Contact No:-9737887278
E-mail ID: prajapatijaish22@gmail.com
 

good boy

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This SOP is not convincing to me at least.
It does not explain what you did after you finished your program (thereby raising doubts about your credibility and employment opportunity).
It should also include clear statement of your future plans (you will come back and seek jobs in xyz fields, how this program will help you in doing that). You have written too many possible careers, this raises question about a fixed career goal.
Most importantly, it does not emphasize on your ties to home country. That is detrimental and will lead to rejection right away.

Follow my current and previous comment, do some research in the forum with the key words. Take your time to draft your next SOP. If you post it here, members will be able to guide you.

Good luck!
 

Jaishkumar

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Apr 24, 2017
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This SOP is not convincing to me at least.
It does not explain what you did after you finished your program (thereby raising doubts about your credibility and employment opportunity).
It should also include clear statement of your future plans (you will come back and seek jobs in xyz fields, how this program will help you in doing that). You have written too many possible careers, this raises question about a fixed career goal.
Most importantly, it does not emphasize on your ties to home country. That is detrimental and will lead to rejection right away.

Follow my current and previous comment, do some research in the forum with the key words. Take your time to draft your next SOP. If you post it here, members will be able to guide you.

Good luck!
Thanks ....bro.....I m now especially hire a person for my SOP ....he will make a good SOP after my CAIPS report (applied on 4th may)....... hopefully I will get my report nearly 5th of June.
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My another question is bro that I have change my course now from PG certificate course (advanced Healthcare leadership) to Diploma course ( developmental Service worker) ....will it affect my visa ...because this is not available for may intake now it's available for September so...I have chosen ... opportunity is more that's why
 

Jaishkumar

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Apr 24, 2017
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Your consultancy did a crappy job, I must add! How much did you pay them (if you don't mind) ?
..yess definitely bro....they have made poor SOP ...but I didn't recognise early now I m paying for it that is 2 time refusal.
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I have payed 3500rs for visa file and SOP
 

Jaishkumar

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Apr 24, 2017
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I will post my CAIPS report when I have in my hand Bro......I have applied on 4th may ...so, I don't have idea till which date I get it.
 

good boy

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CAIPS takes 30 days.

Whatever course you have chosen needs to be explained and connected with your career in the format I mentioned.
 

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Thanks ....bro.....I m now especially hire a person for my SOP ....he will make a good SOP after my CAIPS report (applied on 4th may)....... hopefully I will get my report nearly 5th of June.

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My another question is bro that I have change my course now from PG certificate course (advanced Healthcare leadership) to Diploma course ( developmental Service worker) ....will it affect my visa ...because this is not available for may intake now it's available for September so...I have chosen ... opportunity is more that's why
i think you should go for previous PG program .....if you change program it makes negative impression , you can only change prog if its not relevant to previous studies but i think you should b good with PG course .

i got 3 refusal and finally its approved in 4th attempt. .. and i didn't change my program. ...stay positive. ...never lose Hope .....Good luck
 

good boy

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i think you should go for previous PG program .....if you change program it makes negative impression , you can only change prog if its not relevant to previous studies but i think you should b good with PG course .

i got 3 refusal and finally its approved in 4th attempt. .. and i didn't change my program. ...stay positive. ...never lose Hope .....Good luck

Congrats on your success Rajwinder. Could you please share your success story with us? (Reasons of previous refusals, your last CAIPS and SOP) It will help us all.

Normally people give up after 3rd attempt. You have really fought till the last ball!
 

Jaishkumar

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Apr 24, 2017
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i think you should go for previous PG program .....if you change program it makes negative impression , you can only change prog if its not relevant to previous studies but i think you should b good with PG course .

i got 3 refusal and finally its approved in 4th attempt. .. and i didn't change my program. ...stay positive. ...never lose Hope .....Good luck
Rajwinder bro.. actually the course which I have chosen...is the only 2 year course availble for may intake.....but as I got 2 refusal...and I m going for September take..... I have good course option thats why I chose that.... And I will strongly mention it in my SOP Didi this is enough....!!.

Because changing course is not a big deal if it is relavent to our previous studies and mentioning a good SOP will work ??? What you say rajwinder bro please reply...it's worthy for me
 

Jaishkumar

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Apr 24, 2017
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CAIPS takes 3.

Whatever course you have chosen needs to be explained and onnected with your career in the format I mentioned.
Yes ...bro ..for September intake I got very good relavent course ...and opportunity is more ...that's why I change my course ...first one is of PG certificate course now it's of diploma...course .
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I will surely post the CAIPS report ..when I get it...!! Hopefully as u say 30days
Then 4th of June nearby I get