Yes, I feel the same. I should add a couple of paragraphs of home ties and my work scope here. Thank you so much for your feedback!So couple of things that stand out, you did mention a lot about supply chain but you hardly showed any ties to your home country. You should have mentioned the plan of you coming back here and working with MNCs or mentioned the property your family holds. Infact you coming back to India is just one paragraph, you should have expanded more on that, your SOP is well written just a few amendments. You should apply again with Sds this time to get a faster turn around.