LOOKS FINE. i wud suggest ol to CC PM as well because if this matter is raised thru PM than definately the PM office will look into this matter as well secondly we shud b at lest 50 applicants and send them email on same day or with 1 day gap.
pittabread said:guys look at this letter and propose changes if you like
Email Subject. Urgent query
Dear Honourable Minister Kenny,
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Name
DOB
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File NO.
I am taking this opportunity to write to you regarding the long tiring wait that has been faced by many Pakistani applicants for a long time. Sir, I applied for FSW program on put date here and it has been almost put time here years / months that I have been anxiously waiting for a decision on my application. Sir, if you compare Pakistani applicants with any other nationality you would observe that its only us that have been singled out. The reasons given for these delays are so called lengthy security / back ground checks.
Sir, many of us have sacrificed other good career options just in favour of Canada as we think your great country Canada is the best place in the world to go and settle down. Our family lives have been affected badly and many of us are now suffering from depression and anxiety but this long wait is not coming to end.
I therefore request your highness to please look into the matter and give instructions to visa offices to start issuing visas to Pakistani applicants.
We will highly appreciate your co-operation and consideration.
Hope to hear from you soon and thanking you in anticipation.
Kind Regards
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