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Academic IELTS 10/ March

Harpreet1512

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Mar 18, 2018
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[QUOTE="Harpreet1512, post: 6800429, yeah.. othrwise reading was easy.. i think i answrred 2 para as influence of commerce and last as an example which forced to think[/QUOTE]
i think 2nd last para was something like collaborating to find solution.
 

Pal94

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Feb 24, 2018
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[QUOTE="Harpreet1512, post: 6800429, yeah.. othrwise reading was easy.. i think i answrred 2 para as influence of commerce and last as an example which forced to think
i think 2nd last para was something like collaborating to find solution.[/QUOTE]
Yes you are right
 

Pal94

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Feb 24, 2018
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yeah.. it was something like we blame society wheneven an individual behaves anti social or indulges in a crime.
wt do u think who shud be held responsible
Oky... Was it cause solution essay?
Who is responsible for their behaviour? Or was it like who is responsible to reduce their behaviour?
 

Harpreet1512

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Mar 18, 2018
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Oky... Was it cause solution essay?
Who is responsible for their behaviour? Or was it like who is responsible to reduce their behaviour?
solution i think was not asked. thr were two ques. is society to be blamed and who should be held responsible. although in conclusion i mentioned a short solution
 

Pal94

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Feb 24, 2018
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solution i think was not asked. thr were two ques. is society to be blamed and who should be held responsible. although in conclusion i mentioned a short solution
It is like I also wrote... But many students wrote solutions of this essay...
 

Pal94

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Feb 24, 2018
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solution i think was not asked. thr were two ques. is society to be blamed and who should be held responsible. although in conclusion i mentioned a short solution
I gave solutions in 2nd paragraph but indirectly...I wrote who is responsible then what should they done to reduce it in one line... . I didn't write word solutions in my essay...