Academic . United kingdom 10 Nov
Task 1 . Process diagram of manufacturing jam from fruits .
Task 2 . In many places young people choose shopping as their leisure time activity . Why it is so ? It is a positive or negative development?
I wrote
the process of making jam
to begin next following this subsequently and finally
structure
And stated in overall section kind of important thing
and 2nd part
used
paraphrasing
Ibelieve that.......
this essay will firstly discuss the main reason which is .....,secondly,an anaylsis of detriments of shopping by young age group,followed a reasoned conclussion
...(par 1)
...(par 2)
In conclusion, I believe that ......,whereas......,given this situation,ıts predicted that........