+1(514) 937-9445 or Toll-free (Canada & US) +1 (888) 947-9445

SOP written by agent .... plz help

lovepreet_singh

Star Member
Jun 5, 2021
78
3
:(
Statement of Purpose


Glad to introduce myself as ___________, a fellow student from India. It is a great opportunity to apply for under-graduate of “electrical engineering technician” at ____________ College. In this Statement of Purpose, I would like to describe who I am and why I want to study in Canada.

Family Background:

To begin with Family background, I would like to talk about my Family members & their occupation.I belong to a Hindu family living in __________________-____spain____

Educational Background:

I completed my Senior Secondary (Science) from___________________________, Amritsar in 2019.

I appeared for English language proficiency test IELTS and scored 6.0 overall with individual scores 6.0 in Listening, 6.0 in Reading, 6.0 in Writing, 6.0 in speaking.


Why Studying Electrical Engineering Technician:

The Electrical Engineering Technician program will provide student’s with a solid foundation in electrical and electronic theory and practices.
In this college engineering program's courses, under the supervision of a qualified instructor, student will be exposed to a defined range of electrical functions. Among them will be installation, testing, maintaining, repairing, analyzing and troubleshooting specific kinds of electrical circuits, equipment and systems.
The School of Engineering Technology and Applied Science's labs will present ample opportunity for extensive practice to develop the skills required to assume entry-level positions in the electrical industry and related areas.
Upon program completion, student will be able to work as an entry-level electrical engineering technician in a range of employment settings in commercial and utility industries that use electrical technology. Student will also be prepared for various other electrical environments, including those relating to power distribution and utilization, electrical maintenance, and installation and control systems.

Why Centennial College:

I am drawn towards Centennial College in Toronto because it offers me numerous platforms to develop my overall competence. Its flexible curriculum is in sync with my aspirations.Centennial College is proud to be a part of a rich history of education in this province and in this city. I was also influenced by the student services and support being provided to student specially career development programs for preparing students for workplace and helping them to connect with industry employers, Co-ops and work internships to use theoretical knowledge into practical and gaining valuable work experience by observing the real challenges faced at the industry workplace, Unique Mentoring program in which seniors students of particular program help student to adapt the new environment and Canadian lifestyle at Centennial College.CentennialCollege is promoting innovation and entrepreneurship whichhelps to establish successful and sustainable and young ventures.

I am also attracted to the world class infrastructure and diversity of culture across several campuses in Greater Toronto area. Centennial’s size is a good example of its program diversity. Also, completing under-graduate from an international reputed college will make me a truly global citizen in terms of experience and help me to gain a wider scope of knowledge.

I would be obliged if I am granted platform to study in Centennial college, I am able to uphold your belief in me. I will study and work hard to deliver the best of my potential consistently throughout the program. Therefore, I request Canadian High Commission to grant my student visa and give me an opportunity to study under-Graduate in electrical engineering technician from Centennial College, Toronto, Ontario, Canada.

Warm Regards,
 

scylla

VIP Member
Jun 8, 2010
95,840
22,108
Toronto
Category........
Visa Office......
Buffalo
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
App. Filed.......
28-05-2010
AOR Received.
19-08-2010
File Transfer...
28-06-2010
Passport Req..
01-10-2010
VISA ISSUED...
05-10-2010
LANDED..........
05-10-2010
:(
Statement of Purpose


Glad to introduce myself as ___________, a fellow student from India. It is a great opportunity to apply for under-graduate of “electrical engineering technician” at ____________ College. In this Statement of Purpose, I would like to describe who I am and why I want to study in Canada.

Family Background:

To begin with Family background, I would like to talk about my Family members & their occupation.I belong to a Hindu family living in __________________-____spain____

Educational Background:

I completed my Senior Secondary (Science) from___________________________, Amritsar in 2019.

I appeared for English language proficiency test IELTS and scored 6.0 overall with individual scores 6.0 in Listening, 6.0 in Reading, 6.0 in Writing, 6.0 in speaking.


Why Studying Electrical Engineering Technician:

The Electrical Engineering Technician program will provide student’s with a solid foundation in electrical and electronic theory and practices.
In this college engineering program's courses, under the supervision of a qualified instructor, student will be exposed to a defined range of electrical functions. Among them will be installation, testing, maintaining, repairing, analyzing and troubleshooting specific kinds of electrical circuits, equipment and systems.
The School of Engineering Technology and Applied Science's labs will present ample opportunity for extensive practice to develop the skills required to assume entry-level positions in the electrical industry and related areas.
Upon program completion, student will be able to work as an entry-level electrical engineering technician in a range of employment settings in commercial and utility industries that use electrical technology. Student will also be prepared for various other electrical environments, including those relating to power distribution and utilization, electrical maintenance, and installation and control systems.

Why Centennial College:

I am drawn towards Centennial College in Toronto because it offers me numerous platforms to develop my overall competence. Its flexible curriculum is in sync with my aspirations.Centennial College is proud to be a part of a rich history of education in this province and in this city. I was also influenced by the student services and support being provided to student specially career development programs for preparing students for workplace and helping them to connect with industry employers, Co-ops and work internships to use theoretical knowledge into practical and gaining valuable work experience by observing the real challenges faced at the industry workplace, Unique Mentoring program in which seniors students of particular program help student to adapt the new environment and Canadian lifestyle at Centennial College.CentennialCollege is promoting innovation and entrepreneurship whichhelps to establish successful and sustainable and young ventures.

I am also attracted to the world class infrastructure and diversity of culture across several campuses in Greater Toronto area. Centennial’s size is a good example of its program diversity. Also, completing under-graduate from an international reputed college will make me a truly global citizen in terms of experience and help me to gain a wider scope of knowledge.

I would be obliged if I am granted platform to study in Centennial college, I am able to uphold your belief in me. I will study and work hard to deliver the best of my potential consistently throughout the program. Therefore, I request Canadian High Commission to grant my student visa and give me an opportunity to study under-Graduate in electrical engineering technician from Centennial College, Toronto, Ontario, Canada.

Warm Regards,
It's not very good. Write one yourself.
 
  • Like
Reactions: wonderbly

Donaldp007

Star Member
Mar 15, 2021
58
4
Nigeria
Category........
STUDY
:(
Statement of Purpose


Glad to introduce myself as ___________, a fellow student from India. It is a great opportunity to apply for under-graduate of “electrical engineering technician” at ____________ College. In this Statement of Purpose, I would like to describe who I am and why I want to study in Canada.

Family Background:

To begin with Family background, I would like to talk about my Family members & their occupation.I belong to a Hindu family living in __________________-____spain____

Educational Background:

I completed my Senior Secondary (Science) from___________________________, Amritsar in 2019.

I appeared for English language proficiency test IELTS and scored 6.0 overall with individual scores 6.0 in Listening, 6.0 in Reading, 6.0 in Writing, 6.0 in speaking.


Why Studying Electrical Engineering Technician:

The Electrical Engineering Technician program will provide student’s with a solid foundation in electrical and electronic theory and practices.
In this college engineering program's courses, under the supervision of a qualified instructor, student will be exposed to a defined range of electrical functions. Among them will be installation, testing, maintaining, repairing, analyzing and troubleshooting specific kinds of electrical circuits, equipment and systems.
The School of Engineering Technology and Applied Science's labs will present ample opportunity for extensive practice to develop the skills required to assume entry-level positions in the electrical industry and related areas.
Upon program completion, student will be able to work as an entry-level electrical engineering technician in a range of employment settings in commercial and utility industries that use electrical technology. Student will also be prepared for various other electrical environments, including those relating to power distribution and utilization, electrical maintenance, and installation and control systems.

Why Centennial College:

I am drawn towards Centennial College in Toronto because it offers me numerous platforms to develop my overall competence. Its flexible curriculum is in sync with my aspirations.Centennial College is proud to be a part of a rich history of education in this province and in this city. I was also influenced by the student services and support being provided to student specially career development programs for preparing students for workplace and helping them to connect with industry employers, Co-ops and work internships to use theoretical knowledge into practical and gaining valuable work experience by observing the real challenges faced at the industry workplace, Unique Mentoring program in which seniors students of particular program help student to adapt the new environment and Canadian lifestyle at Centennial College.CentennialCollege is promoting innovation and entrepreneurship whichhelps to establish successful and sustainable and young ventures.

I am also attracted to the world class infrastructure and diversity of culture across several campuses in Greater Toronto area. Centennial’s size is a good example of its program diversity. Also, completing under-graduate from an international reputed college will make me a truly global citizen in terms of experience and help me to gain a wider scope of knowledge.

I would be obliged if I am granted platform to study in Centennial college, I am able to uphold your belief in me. I will study and work hard to deliver the best of my potential consistently throughout the program. Therefore, I request Canadian High Commission to grant my student visa and give me an opportunity to study under-Graduate in electrical engineering technician from Centennial College, Toronto, Ontario, Canada.

Warm Regards,
What about the home ties ?
 

Simba112

VIP Member
Mar 25, 2021
4,478
1,662
:(
Statement of Purpose


Glad to introduce myself as ___________, a fellow student from India. It is a great opportunity to apply for under-graduate of “electrical engineering technician” at ____________ College. In this Statement of Purpose, I would like to describe who I am and why I want to study in Canada.

Family Background:

To begin with Family background, I would like to talk about my Family members & their occupation.I belong to a Hindu family living in __________________-____spain____

Educational Background:

I completed my Senior Secondary (Science) from___________________________, Amritsar in 2019.

I appeared for English language proficiency test IELTS and scored 6.0 overall with individual scores 6.0 in Listening, 6.0 in Reading, 6.0 in Writing, 6.0 in speaking.


Why Studying Electrical Engineering Technician:

The Electrical Engineering Technician program will provide student’s with a solid foundation in electrical and electronic theory and practices.
In this college engineering program's courses, under the supervision of a qualified instructor, student will be exposed to a defined range of electrical functions. Among them will be installation, testing, maintaining, repairing, analyzing and troubleshooting specific kinds of electrical circuits, equipment and systems.
The School of Engineering Technology and Applied Science's labs will present ample opportunity for extensive practice to develop the skills required to assume entry-level positions in the electrical industry and related areas.
Upon program completion, student will be able to work as an entry-level electrical engineering technician in a range of employment settings in commercial and utility industries that use electrical technology. Student will also be prepared for various other electrical environments, including those relating to power distribution and utilization, electrical maintenance, and installation and control systems.

Why Centennial College:

I am drawn towards Centennial College in Toronto because it offers me numerous platforms to develop my overall competence. Its flexible curriculum is in sync with my aspirations.Centennial College is proud to be a part of a rich history of education in this province and in this city. I was also influenced by the student services and support being provided to student specially career development programs for preparing students for workplace and helping them to connect with industry employers, Co-ops and work internships to use theoretical knowledge into practical and gaining valuable work experience by observing the real challenges faced at the industry workplace, Unique Mentoring program in which seniors students of particular program help student to adapt the new environment and Canadian lifestyle at Centennial College.CentennialCollege is promoting innovation and entrepreneurship whichhelps to establish successful and sustainable and young ventures.

I am also attracted to the world class infrastructure and diversity of culture across several campuses in Greater Toronto area. Centennial’s size is a good example of its program diversity. Also, completing under-graduate from an international reputed college will make me a truly global citizen in terms of experience and help me to gain a wider scope of knowledge.

I would be obliged if I am granted platform to study in Centennial college, I am able to uphold your belief in me. I will study and work hard to deliver the best of my potential consistently throughout the program. Therefore, I request Canadian High Commission to grant my student visa and give me an opportunity to study under-Graduate in electrical engineering technician from Centennial College, Toronto, Ontario, Canada.

Warm Regards,
Your agent wrote SOP as if he was writting “About the Centennial College” or selling programs to prospective students. I give it 1 star out of 5. Thats a problem letting someone write about your unique situation
 
Last edited:

Sblue

Hero Member
May 19, 2021
240
95
It sure reads like a template. Write one yourself and you should be able to, especially when you are looking to study in Canada.
Introduction, Academic/work experience, why this course, why this college/uni. why Canada. future scope (which could include job titles and pay scale you are aiming towards after the degree).
Also to keep a professional tone.
 
  • Like
Reactions: lovepreet_singh

Sblue

Hero Member
May 19, 2021
240
95
Glad to introduce myself as
To begin with Family background, I would like to talk about my Family members & their occupation

Unnecessary fillers and no you don't talk to a stranger like that. Id rather write facts about me then these filler sentences which are looking so bad.
Check YouTube, blogs, countless SOP's you can take inspiration from.
 
  • Like
Reactions: lovepreet_singh