Hello experts my visa was recently refused i am applying again this week i have made a stronger sop.can anyone check my sop please?
Visa refused need help in sop
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well the reasons were that i wont leave canada and that i wont be a bobfide students and my grades were low in high schoolAs others will advise, you need to share the notes of the refusal and provide your drafted SOP.
Well you better give context. Provide your education background,IELTS, and the drafted SOP.,etc. You cannot expect others guess all of that. No one will give you the best SOP per se.well the reasons were that i wont leave canada and that i wont be a bobfide students and my grades were low in high school
Well last time i had not given ielts the uni asked me to give duoling because of the pandemic. This time i have ielts i got 7.5 overall with no band less than 6.5 last time my duolingo score was 110. I got admission in international college of Manitoba which is part of uni of manitoba i will be doing a utp foundation program which will take me to the degree in uni of manitoba. Last time i paid one semister fees this timw i have paid the whole year fees. Here are the refusal notesWell you better give context. Provide your education background,IELTS, and the drafted SOP.,etc. You cannot expect others guess all of that. No one will give you the best SOP per se.
O level grades from Kuwait are 2 C's and 2 D's……The client has a poor academic record. PA accepted into a bridging program offered by International College Manitoba. PA would be required to satisfactorily complete four semesters before being admitted into U. Manitoba Bachelor of Science program. Given PA's previous academic achievement which demonstrated C and D level grades, I am not satisfied that applicant's previous studies and employment align with proposed studies in Canada…..I am not satisfied that the cost and difficulty of studying in Canada are commensurate with the applicant's circumstances.
It is not clear if the PA is now resident in Kuwait or Pakistan: he is not well established and pull factors to CDA may outweigh ties elsewhere. I am not satisfied he is a genuine student or that he will leave CDA. The study plan does not appear reasonable given the applicant's employment and education history. Limited explanation as to the relevance of proposed studies to PA's academic achievements and future academic/career goals. The stated benefits of their intended studies do not seem to warrant the cost and difficulty of undertaking foreign education. PA does not appear to be working despite completing his secondary studies in mid-2019.
Which visa office is it?Well last time i had not given ielts the uni asked me to give duoling because of the pandemic. This time i have ielts i got 7.5 overall with no band less than 6.5 last time my duolingo score was 110. I got admission in international college of Manitoba which is part of uni of manitoba i will be doing a utp foundation program which will take me to the degree in uni of manitoba. Last time i paid one semister fees this timw i have paid the whole year fees. Here are the refusal notes
O level grades from Kuwait are 2 C's and 2 D's……The client has a poor academic record. PA accepted into a bridging program offered by International College Manitoba. PA would be required to satisfactorily complete four semesters before being admitted into U. Manitoba Bachelor of Science program. Given PA's previous academic achievement which demonstrated C and D level grades, I am not satisfied that applicant's previous studies and employment align with proposed studies in Canada…..I am not satisfied that the cost and difficulty of studying in Canada are commensurate with the applicant's circumstances.
It is not clear if the PA is now resident in Kuwait or Pakistan: he is not well established and pull factors to CDA may outweigh ties elsewhere. I am not satisfied he is a genuine student or that he will leave CDA. The study plan does not appear reasonable given the applicant's employment and education history. Limited explanation as to the relevance of proposed studies to PA's academic achievements and future academic/career goals. The stated benefits of their intended studies do not seem to warrant the cost and difficulty of undertaking foreign education. PA does not appear to be working despite completing his secondary studies in mid-2019.
Here is what I understand from your texts. You need to work on your writing and composition, its very confusing what you want to convey and there is a lot of missing information which must also have been reflected in your SOP to a point that VO couldn't figure out if you live in Pakistan or Kuwait. This is the biggest VO note I have ever seen so the VO took out time to explain your evaluation in detail. You are not doing anything after completion of secondary studies, why is that? its been almost 2 years? you need to work on your SOP and provide as many documented proofs as you can.
sir i have made a new sop woth every detail could i get your email or anything so can give me a review about it pleaseThats's better. I don't think your SOP is the sole issue. Before you apply again, you need to address every points on your refusal. Like your education, home country ties, and the study plan.
Which visa office is it?
Here is what I understand from your texts. You need to work on your writing and composition, its very confusing what you want to convey and there is a lot of missing information which must also have been reflected in your SOP to a point that VO couldn't figure out if you live in Pakistan or Kuwait. This is the biggest VO note I have ever seen so the VO took out time to explain your evaluation in detail. You are not doing anything after completion of secondary studies, why is that? its been almost 2 years? you need to work on your SOP and provide as many documented proofs as you can.
its dubai visa office i have made a new sop with more details can i get your emails so you could review itWhich visa office is it?
Here is what I understand from your texts. You need to work on your writing and composition, its very confusing what you want to convey and there is a lot of missing information which must also have been reflected in your SOP to a point that VO couldn't figure out if you live in Pakistan or Kuwait. This is the biggest VO note I have ever seen so the VO took out time to explain your evaluation in detail. You are not doing anything after completion of secondary studies, why is that? its been almost 2 years? you need to work on your SOP and provide as many documented proofs as you can.
I am not an expert when it comes to SOP, but there are several senior members here who could help review your SOP if you search for some threads where people have discussed their SOPs.its dubai visa office i have made a new sop with more details can i get your emails so you could review it
And there is no visa office in Dubai, its in Abu Dhabi. I would advise to get to know as many information as you can about the study permit before applying again. Do not rush to apply again. Once you know everything and confident then apply.
You have too poor academics. And the visa officer doesn't believe you will leave Canada.Well last time i had not given ielts the uni asked me to give duoling because of the pandemic. This time i have ielts i got 7.5 overall with no band less than 6.5 last time my duolingo score was 110. I got admission in international college of Manitoba which is part of uni of manitoba i will be doing a utp foundation program which will take me to the degree in uni of manitoba. Last time i paid one semister fees this timw i have paid the whole year fees. Here are the refusal notes
O level grades from Kuwait are 2 C's and 2 D's……The client has a poor academic record. PA accepted into a bridging program offered by International College Manitoba. PA would be required to satisfactorily complete four semesters before being admitted into U. Manitoba Bachelor of Science program. Given PA's previous academic achievement which demonstrated C and D level grades, I am not satisfied that applicant's previous studies and employment align with proposed studies in Canada…..I am not satisfied that the cost and difficulty of studying in Canada are commensurate with the applicant's circumstances.
It is not clear if the PA is now resident in Kuwait or Pakistan: he is not well established and pull factors to CDA may outweigh ties elsewhere. I am not satisfied he is a genuine student or that he will leave CDA. The study plan does not appear reasonable given the applicant's employment and education history. Limited explanation as to the relevance of proposed studies to PA's academic achievements and future academic/career goals. The stated benefits of their intended studies do not seem to warrant the cost and difficulty of undertaking foreign education. PA does not appear to be working despite completing his secondary studies in mid-2019.
How are you addressing those points?
If you are not leaving Canada, your sop can't help you.
Sir i never had any intentions staying in canada my dad owns many properties in canada i have soent almost my entire life out of pakistan and i want to return to pakistan after my studies. Could you review my sop?You have too poor academics. And the visa officer doesn't believe you will leave Canada.
How are you addressing those points?
If you are not leaving Canada, your sop can't help you.
I'm not an expert and i doubt i would be able to help you more than what i'm advising you now. You may want to read previous post here related to SOP. Like
https://www.canadavisa.com/canada-immigration-discussion-board/threads/have-a-look-at-my-sop.682895/
https://www.canadavisa.com/canada-immigration-discussion-board/threads/have-a-look-at-my-sop.682895/
why not doing anything after completion of secondary studies is a problem for the visa?Which visa office is it?
Here is what I understand from your texts. You need to work on your writing and composition, its very confusing what you want to convey and there is a lot of missing information which must also have been reflected in your SOP to a point that VO couldn't figure out if you live in Pakistan or Kuwait. This is the biggest VO note I have ever seen so the VO took out time to explain your evaluation in detail. You are not doing anything after completion of secondary studies, why is that? its been almost 2 years? you need to work on your SOP and provide as many documented proofs as you can.
what if he/she is not able to find a work and want to gain Canadian education to increase employment chances in home country?
Not doing anything for 2 years is not a problem per se. Not being able to convincingly explain why, IS a problem.why not doing anything after completion of secondary studies is a problem for the visa?
what if he/she is not able to find a work and want to gain Canadian education to increase employment chances in home country?