Study permit approved after 3 refusals

[hamza1995]

Hello everyone,
As you can see in the title, I applied total 4 times for Canadian study permit from February 2019 to July 2019. They refused my study permit 3 times. Last 2 were refused with the same reason : purpose of visit.
My profile wasn't so strong. 12th: 46%
Bachelors : 50%
Current topup degree (Final year of another bachelor's degree) 63% (Didn't even receive my degree certificate of second degree when I applied, I received it after visa approval)
Ielts: 7.5 no less than 7
I ordered GCMS NOTES after my first refusal and tried to understand from the reasons given for refusal and tried to write a new statement of Purpose, but even after that, they rejected it twice.
With several rejections and studying my old statement of Purpose, I slowly started understanding what visa officer is actually looking for in your application. I wrote a statement of purpose of 5 pages (it's too much, isn't it) with every detailed information and within 2 weeks, I got visa approval. So I want to tell everyone who is thinking to give up after 1 or 2 rejections even after having a strong case, just don't. Don't give up. If your academic and ielts score are good, have sufficient funds, work on your statement of Purpose. Write what they want to read. Need some help? I will help you without charging anything unlike consultants since I would be more than happy if I can help you achieve your dreams.

Would you please send me your SOP to Ouchguir.hamza@gmail.com i will be grateful if you could help me with your exemple

 

[Waseema16]

Hello, will you please forward your sop for reference. This is my email ID: jinkubaskar@gmail.com

That’s Great!! Can you please send the format of SOP to mmbaig00@gmail.com.Thanks in Advance..

 

[arhue]

I don't understand how someone else's SOP can help anyone. SOPs vary completely depending on your personal situation and no 2 can be alike. Sharing SOPs can potentially jeopardise your and the other person's application. If you are especially bad at writing a SOP, consider paying someone to write one. As for refusals, addressing your reasons for refusal noted in GCMS notes is what is important, copying someone else's SOP isn't going to help at all.

 

[Ahsanh561]

Hello everyone,
As you can see in the title, I applied total 4 times for Canadian study permit from February 2019 to July 2019. They refused my study permit 3 times. Last 2 were refused with the same reason : purpose of visit.
My profile wasn't so strong. 12th: 46%
Bachelors : 50%
Current topup degree (Final year of another bachelor's degree) 63% (Didn't even receive my degree certificate of second degree when I applied, I received it after visa approval)
Ielts: 7.5 no less than 7
I ordered GCMS NOTES after my first refusal and tried to understand from the reasons given for refusal and tried to write a new statement of Purpose, but even after that, they rejected it twice.
With several rejections and studying my old statement of Purpose, I slowly started understanding what visa officer is actually looking for in your application. I wrote a statement of purpose of 5 pages (it's too much, isn't it) with every detailed information and within 2 weeks, I got visa approval. So I want to tell everyone who is thinking to give up after 1 or 2 rejections even after having a strong case, just don't. Don't give up. If your academic and ielts score are good, have sufficient funds, work on your statement of Purpose. Write what they want to read. Need some help? I will help you without charging anything unlike consultants since I would be more than happy if I can help you achieve your dreams.

Hi, happy for you,for the statement of purpose, what is the best way to explain ties to your country? I need help with that letter, if you can help I would appreciate that

 

[addy_aj95]

looks like @Kr02612 is inactive guys this guy forwarded me his SOP and its fantastic used as a reference and got visa after 1st rejection

Here is my email id just send an email i will forward you the SOP
piraizaz5@gmail.com

Just mailed you, please revert ASAP

 

[frenlypickachu]

Can you please please PM me? I have a strong 12th and IELTS yet I am rejected multiple times. can we please share some form of contact info (Discord, Telegram , whatsapp) in PM

 

[ukankit]

Just mailed you, please revert ASAP

hey addy. did u get the sop from GMP97

 

[ukankit]

looks like @Kr02612 is inactive guys this guy forwarded me his SOP and its fantastic used as a reference and got visa after 1st rejection

Here is my email id just send an email i will forward you the SOP
piraizaz5@gmail.com

hi there. I am also the one who is craving for the Kr's SOP, but as he is still inactive, could u plz share the sop with me n others(who still seek help). I have also emailed u, looking forward to hear from you. Thanks

 

[GMP97]

hi there. I am also the one who is craving for the Kr's SOP, but as he is still inactive, could u plz share the sop with me n others(who still seek help). I have also emailed u, looking forward to hear from you. Thanks

I just sent it to you

 

[GMP97]

I don't understand how someone else's SOP can help anyone. SOPs vary completely depending on your personal situation and no 2 can be alike. Sharing SOPs can potentially jeopardise your and the other person's application. If you are especially bad at writing a SOP, consider paying someone to write one. As for refusals, addressing your reasons for refusal noted in GCMS notes is what is important, copying someone else's SOP isn't going to help at all.

Nobody copies SOP.. It's the format and what should be included that poeple have trouble with anyone smart enough to write their own SOP knlws that you don't COPY anything from other SOPs

 

[ukankit]

Nobody copies SOP.. It's the format and what should be included that poeple have trouble with anyone smart enough to write their own SOP knlws that you don't COPY anything from other SOPs

Thank you. I received it,
N thanks for acknowledging this concern of "Arhue's" comment. Yes it is true, these SOP's is just to acknowledge the mistakes that had been in the previous SOP's. The approved SOP's samples gives a glimpse of what exactly is to be written to cover those parts with different sections of refusals, mainly to rectify those previous mistakes.
Thanks again Mr. Pirzada (GMP97). Take care

 

[Kuldip tiwari]

Hello everyone,
As you can see in the title, I applied total 4 times for Canadian study permit from February 2019 to July 2019. They refused my study permit 3 times. Last 2 were refused with the same reason : purpose of visit.
My profile wasn't so strong. 12th: 46%
Bachelors : 50%
Current topup degree (Final year of another bachelor's degree) 63% (Didn't even receive my degree certificate of second degree when I applied, I received it after visa approval)
Ielts: 7.5 no less than 7
I ordered GCMS NOTES after my first refusal and tried to understand from the reasons given for refusal and tried to write a new statement of Purpose, but even after that, they rejected it twice.
With several rejections and studying my old statement of Purpose, I slowly started understanding what visa officer is actually looking for in your application. I wrote a statement of purpose of 5 pages (it's too much, isn't it) with every detailed information and within 2 weeks, I got visa approval. So I want to tell everyone who is thinking to give up after 1 or 2 rejections even after having a strong case, just don't. Don't give up. If your academic and ielts score are good, have sufficient funds, work on your statement of Purpose. Write what they want to read. Need some help? I will help you without charging anything unlike consultants since I would be more than happy if I can help you achieve your dreams.

Bro I also got 3 refusals so can you please snd your LOE on kuldiptiwari001gmail.com

 

[captainarabiia]

Bro I also got 3 refusals so can you please snd your LOE on kuldiptiwari001gmail.com

Did you apply for GCMS notes lately on any of the refused applications?

 

[Kuldip tiwari]

Hello everyone,
As you can see in the title, I applied total 4 times for Canadian study permit from February 2019 to July 2019. They refused my study permit 3 times. Last 2 were refused with the same reason : purpose of visit.
My profile wasn't so strong. 12th: 46%
Bachelors : 50%
Current topup degree (Final year of another bachelor's degree) 63% (Didn't even receive my degree certificate of second degree when I applied, I received it after visa approval)
Ielts: 7.5 no less than 7
I ordered GCMS NOTES after my first refusal and tried to understand from the reasons given for refusal and tried to write a new statement of Purpose, but even after that, they rejected it twice.
With several rejections and studying my old statement of Purpose, I slowly started understanding what visa officer is actually looking for in your application. I wrote a statement of purpose of 5 pages (it's too much, isn't it) with every detailed information and within 2 weeks, I got visa approval. So I want to tell everyone who is thinking to give up after 1 or 2 rejections even after having a strong case, just don't. Don't give up. If your academic and ielts score are good, have sufficient funds, work on your statement of Purpose. Write what they want to read. Need some help? I will help you without charging anything unlike consultants since I would be more than happy if I can help you achieve your dreams.

Bro can you please share your Le and Sop on
Kuldiptiwari001@gmail.com

 

[frenlypickachu]

Thank you. I received it,
N thanks for acknowledging this concern of "Arhue's" comment. Yes it is true, these SOP's is just to acknowledge the mistakes that had been in the previous SOP's. The approved SOP's samples gives a glimpse of what exactly is to be written to cover those parts with different sections of refusals, mainly to rectify those previous mistakes.
Thanks again Mr. Pirzada (GMP97). Take care

Can you please email the SOP as well? lenixxthree@gmail.com