Hi to all ,
In may 2020 intake i got refusal and then i applied for GCMS notes but i not able to fully understand it that what changes i have need to make ..
This was written in the notes ⬇⬇
THE APPLICANT HAS FAILED TO SATISFY ME THAT THE COURSE OF STUDY IS REASONABLE GIVEN THE HIGH COST OF INTERNATIONAL STUDY IN CANADA WHEN WEIGHED AGAINST THE POTENTIAL CAREER/EMPLOYMENT BENEFITS , THE LOCAL OPTIONS AVAILABLE FOR SIMILAR STUDIES , AND THE APPLICANT’S EMPLOYEMENT/EDUCATION HISTORY. CONSIDERING PREVIOUS ACADEMIC PERFORMANCE, RELEVANCE OF THE PROPOSE COURSE OF STUDY AND TAKING INTO ACCOUNT FACTORS SUCH AS TRAVEL HISTORY, PERSONAL ESTABLISHMENT AND TIES TO HOME COUNTRY, I AM NOT SATISFIED THAT THE APPLICANT WOULD BE A BONAFIDE STUDENT IN CANADA AND WOULD DEPART CANADA AT THE END OF THE PERIOD AUTHORIZED FOR STAY...
so , anything that u could suggest me to do . It would be a great help .
So your timeline of studies are decent in comparison of various others with alot less qualified students who got there visa....
You need to break the meaning of Caips notes and the reasons mentioned there seems likely due to SOP... all the mentioned refusal reasons are the general thoughts and can only be cleared with SOP. That SOP document is having significance in visa application and seems it lacks to clear the visa officer doubts. The qualifications are just the numbers and certification they never reflect the applicant thoughts, interests & intentions so a strong SOP is the thing i do believe can clear your case.
1. THE APPLICANT HAS FAILED TO SATISFY ME THAT THE COURSE OF STUDY IS REASONABLE GIVEN THE HIGH COST OF INTERNATIONAL STUDY IN CANADA WHEN WEIGHED AGAINST THE POTENTIAL CAREER/EMPLOYMENT BENEFITS , THE LOCAL OPTIONS AVAILABLE FOR SIMILAR STUDIES , AND THE APPLICANT’S EMPLOYEMENT/EDUCATION HISTORY.
::: I have a friend who got the similar refusal reason and her SOP is made by consultant so can expect a formatted copy paste version of it which is very bad and the influence it makes is the negative one with the application.... you need to mention the interest firsts, then the strong reasons to study abroad than india... if you are passionate about the program you will be having all the pros and cons of this course in both the countries..... later your vision needs to be clear how it will offer you better positions in the market in home country... the things you lack here and you get there and the reasons/statements why you finally decided to spend alot of money for this program.
2. The later reason is the common one they make in several other refusal cases as well...
So to improve your case...
1. A better SOP clearing the doubts with the valid proofs
2. Career vision
3. The adequate funds shown will even improve and clear the refusal reason of home ties. i.e CA report will be great even in sds case to make the application stronger as they have refused over this reason which is even not required in sds.
4. Do not make alot of variation in SOP now.. make it relevant to your previous one as well... as it might be not a great intention at you are saying something else earlier and now something else... so stick with some facts and improve the others ..
Your qualification are not the factor if refusal here... more things you can do is the advancements in your course... like advanced diploma or PG program...go with colleges and universities in provices and areas of pilot programs...
As you are previously refused approch with icrcc consultants.. instead of visiting anyone or with the names as they only do the bulk work... your case require individual attention now and you need your involvement needs to be more than the consultant now
