Hi everyone I got rejection as the cic states that there are not sure I will return to India after completion of my studies i.e purpose of visit.
Now I wish to reapply for my visa. I have to change my previous sop kindly help me redesign that as I am quite nervous and unaware pf correct way to do that. My sop was as follows:
Since childhood, I have been a keen learner, observer and my desire to grow has never taken a back seat. I am blessed to have fully supporting parents as well as in laws who have been my companion in all my decisions. After conducting a thorough research I found Canada as the best option that insatiated my desire of continuing further education even after marriage. In order to do so, I have decided to receive my further academics from Canada, the reason being there is a wide scope for the course I am planning to undertake.
In order to do so, I fulfilled the prerequisites of studying abroad by achieving 7.5band in IELTS. My aim is to broaden my knowledge perspectives therefore, I decided to study business management which will definitely expand my skills and I believe will remain unachieved until I study in one of the best colleges in Canada. According to me, my further education will prove a turning point in my career ahead.
Family background:
I live in a nuclear family After marriage and my parents, husband and my in-laws are supporting my education expenses. I have paid my full year college fee and also transferred $10,000 in ICICI Bank for my living expenses in Canada.
Why Canada::
I have done all the studies in my native country and to discover myself more, I intend to choose to Canada for my further education because of its world class education. It is renowned for its hospitality and high standard education. Besides this, the medium of education in Canada is purely English that would obviously take my proficiency to a satisfactory level. This would turn out to be the biggest advantage along with the deeper understanding of international culture. The practical platform of Canadian education provides hands-on skills to the students which enables them to improve their potential.
Other reasons of choosing Canada
➢ Canada is one of the safest and peaceful country across the globe. Being an international student, safety is the most important factor for me to consider when it comes to leaving my home country.
➢ Canada is becoming the top growing destination in the world as it has globally recognised universities that provide endless scope of growth of an individual.
➢ The natives of Canada are highly supportive and friendly that give a warm welcome to international students and make them feel my home.
➢ Canadian government grants every student a permit to work over 40 hours a fortnight, which helps the student to gain additional experience internationally.
➢ Canada is more affordable in terms of cost of living when compared to that of other developed nations like the UK and the USA.
About college:
Capilano University is one of the reputed and finest universities of Canada that provides the knowledge and skills needed for success. This university focuses on imparting learning that is student centred and thus, the study has a wide area to explore the creative thinking. This university focuses on maintaining its standards by providing high teaching strategies. Every coursework provided by this university has a combination of technology and real life experiences. The best thing about this university is the flexibility in the choice from wide variety of courses available.
Furthermore, Capilano University will prove to be a milestone in the path of my success. I firmly believe that this university would be an ideal place for me to pursue a post baccalaureate diploma in North American Business Management and will be helpful for me to achieve all my objectives.
Chosen Course: North American Business Management Applied Post Baccalaureate Diploma
The reason behind my choice of this program is that it would help me to expand my knowledge and open up the world of possibilities that are not there with my current qualification as it is going to let me master different business techniques. Studying at Capilano means jumping into a canyon of learning as this university has small sized classrooms which makes it quite easy for the students to maintain focus and comprehend better. This contemporary world is continuously changing but the fact that this era is mostly owned and run by businesses is undisputed. Therefore, I intend to pursue this course to make myself capable to keep up with this ever reshaping world of opportunities and get the experience of how to become a resource instead of being a liability.
During my research of finding a suitable program I got fascinated by this particular program because it focuses not only on theoretical but also practical skills. I got interested in this course because this course gives me an 8-week practicum work experience that would be an advantage for me being an international student. I would be able to better analyse the business market and give me experiences that would keep aiding me for my whole life. Not only this, working in the business sector would in turn help me make such connections that I can use to work in any part of the world.
Future Opportunities:
After receiving this certificate I would be capable to work internationally which is going to allow me to choose from a wide variety of options which include:
v Business Development Manager
v General Manager
v Finance Manager
v Product Manager
v Business Analyst
v Project Manager
v Entrepreneur
To sum up, receiving a quality education from Capilano college will give me the best chance to prepare myself for future work in the business sector. I am confident that I have fulfilled all the pre-requirements for student visa applications. I hope you will understand my views, the way I want to present to you and also hope for a fruitful result. I hope that I will achieve my goal as I planned. I shall be highly obliged.
This was my previous sop.
My qualifications are Bsc ( computer science) ans Msc (maths). Then I have two year teaching experience and one year experience as admission counselor.
kindly help to design a new one after rejection
Now I wish to reapply for my visa. I have to change my previous sop kindly help me redesign that as I am quite nervous and unaware pf correct way to do that. My sop was as follows:
Since childhood, I have been a keen learner, observer and my desire to grow has never taken a back seat. I am blessed to have fully supporting parents as well as in laws who have been my companion in all my decisions. After conducting a thorough research I found Canada as the best option that insatiated my desire of continuing further education even after marriage. In order to do so, I have decided to receive my further academics from Canada, the reason being there is a wide scope for the course I am planning to undertake.
In order to do so, I fulfilled the prerequisites of studying abroad by achieving 7.5band in IELTS. My aim is to broaden my knowledge perspectives therefore, I decided to study business management which will definitely expand my skills and I believe will remain unachieved until I study in one of the best colleges in Canada. According to me, my further education will prove a turning point in my career ahead.
Family background:
I live in a nuclear family After marriage and my parents, husband and my in-laws are supporting my education expenses. I have paid my full year college fee and also transferred $10,000 in ICICI Bank for my living expenses in Canada.
Why Canada::
I have done all the studies in my native country and to discover myself more, I intend to choose to Canada for my further education because of its world class education. It is renowned for its hospitality and high standard education. Besides this, the medium of education in Canada is purely English that would obviously take my proficiency to a satisfactory level. This would turn out to be the biggest advantage along with the deeper understanding of international culture. The practical platform of Canadian education provides hands-on skills to the students which enables them to improve their potential.
Other reasons of choosing Canada
➢ Canada is one of the safest and peaceful country across the globe. Being an international student, safety is the most important factor for me to consider when it comes to leaving my home country.
➢ Canada is becoming the top growing destination in the world as it has globally recognised universities that provide endless scope of growth of an individual.
➢ The natives of Canada are highly supportive and friendly that give a warm welcome to international students and make them feel my home.
➢ Canadian government grants every student a permit to work over 40 hours a fortnight, which helps the student to gain additional experience internationally.
➢ Canada is more affordable in terms of cost of living when compared to that of other developed nations like the UK and the USA.
About college:
Capilano University is one of the reputed and finest universities of Canada that provides the knowledge and skills needed for success. This university focuses on imparting learning that is student centred and thus, the study has a wide area to explore the creative thinking. This university focuses on maintaining its standards by providing high teaching strategies. Every coursework provided by this university has a combination of technology and real life experiences. The best thing about this university is the flexibility in the choice from wide variety of courses available.
Furthermore, Capilano University will prove to be a milestone in the path of my success. I firmly believe that this university would be an ideal place for me to pursue a post baccalaureate diploma in North American Business Management and will be helpful for me to achieve all my objectives.
Chosen Course: North American Business Management Applied Post Baccalaureate Diploma
The reason behind my choice of this program is that it would help me to expand my knowledge and open up the world of possibilities that are not there with my current qualification as it is going to let me master different business techniques. Studying at Capilano means jumping into a canyon of learning as this university has small sized classrooms which makes it quite easy for the students to maintain focus and comprehend better. This contemporary world is continuously changing but the fact that this era is mostly owned and run by businesses is undisputed. Therefore, I intend to pursue this course to make myself capable to keep up with this ever reshaping world of opportunities and get the experience of how to become a resource instead of being a liability.
During my research of finding a suitable program I got fascinated by this particular program because it focuses not only on theoretical but also practical skills. I got interested in this course because this course gives me an 8-week practicum work experience that would be an advantage for me being an international student. I would be able to better analyse the business market and give me experiences that would keep aiding me for my whole life. Not only this, working in the business sector would in turn help me make such connections that I can use to work in any part of the world.
Future Opportunities:
After receiving this certificate I would be capable to work internationally which is going to allow me to choose from a wide variety of options which include:
v Business Development Manager
v General Manager
v Finance Manager
v Product Manager
v Business Analyst
v Project Manager
v Entrepreneur
To sum up, receiving a quality education from Capilano college will give me the best chance to prepare myself for future work in the business sector. I am confident that I have fulfilled all the pre-requirements for student visa applications. I hope you will understand my views, the way I want to present to you and also hope for a fruitful result. I hope that I will achieve my goal as I planned. I shall be highly obliged.
This was my previous sop.
My qualifications are Bsc ( computer science) ans Msc (maths). Then I have two year teaching experience and one year experience as admission counselor.
kindly help to design a new one after rejection
