What should be the format of my SOP if I am re-applying for student permit after a refusal

[junkietedbundy]

Hi,

I received a refusal for September 2019 intake and now I am planning to apply to my Visa application for May 2020 intake.

The reason for refusal was vague as the VO believed I would not return back to my country. I received my GCMS notes and according to them the Visa officer was not convinced that my choice of course would add much value to my professional journey if we compare the expenses of foreign education.

I previously was enrolled in a single year Marketing course but now I have taken admission in a 2 years management course which aligns well with my future prospects in my own country.

How should I start the SOP? Should I attach a different letter which addresses the Visa officers concern and a separate SOP that provides a detailed information on my reason for choosing Canada? Or it would be better to merge everything in the SOP.

Could really use some expert opinion here.

In case you have any sort of SOP sample that takes visa refusal into account, it would be a great help as well.

Thanks

 

[GMP97]

Hi,

I received a refusal for September 2019 intake and now I am planning to apply to my Visa application for May 2020 intake.

The reason for refusal was vague as the VO believed I would not return back to my country. I received my GCMS notes and according to them the Visa officer was not convinced that my choice of course would add much value to my professional journey if we compare the expenses of foreign education.

I previously was enrolled in a single year Marketing course but now I have taken admission in a 2 years management course which aligns well with my future prospects in my own country.

How should I start the SOP? Should I attach a different letter which addresses the Visa officers concern and a separate SOP that provides a detailed information on my reason for choosing Canada? Or it would be better to merge everything in the SOP.

Could really use some expert opinion here.

In case you have any sort of SOP sample that takes visa refusal into account, it would be a great help as well.

Thanks

I personally wrote a separate letter of explanation for refusals alongwith a detailed SOP

 

[jweekend]

Your SOP should be written as the truth.

 

[junkietedbundy]

I personally wrote a separate letter of explanation for refusals alongwith a detailed SOP

Hi,

Thanks for your input. Would it be possible for you to share your letter of intent with me? Or if you could provide me with a format in which the LOE should be written. I have changed my course after my refusal and I am not sure how to approach the Visa officer about it.