IS THIS A GOOD SOP? WHAT CHANGES COULD BE MADE?

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Hey! So, I've recently faced a Study Visa rejection, I'm from India, I think my application was good besides the SOP, So this is the link to my SOP, can anyone please check and tell me if there's any chance I can make in it?

 

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Hey! So, I've recently faced a Study Visa rejection, I'm from India, I think my application was good besides the SOP, So this is the link to my SOP, can anyone please check and tell me if there's any chance I can make in it?

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