Well, i personally think that the first line of the topic goves us prompts on whcih we can write the essay. In other words, the question asks us about our opinion of the correct age to take adult responsibilities, some of which are driving, voting or marriage.
Now, if I were to write on this topic, I would state that although most countries have a minimum legal age for such big responsibilities, but I think it should be at least 21. Because firstly, if youngsters at age 18 are given the opportunity to obtain licences and drive, they would tend to speed and could cause serious harm to people around them.. And secondly when it comes to marriage, divorce rates are significantly high among teenagers as compared to adults.
Your essay was very clear too... This was just my opinion..
Now, if I were to write on this topic, I would state that although most countries have a minimum legal age for such big responsibilities, but I think it should be at least 21. Because firstly, if youngsters at age 18 are given the opportunity to obtain licences and drive, they would tend to speed and could cause serious harm to people around them.. And secondly when it comes to marriage, divorce rates are significantly high among teenagers as compared to adults.
Your essay was very clear too... This was just my opinion..
