Yes my point was lower after removal of 50points.
Please come up with a strongly worded LOE focusing on the areas below:
1. Why you selected Brandon eg cheaper home, more jobs and less populated unlike Winnipeg
2. Convince the PO that your supporter have a plan to visit you once in two weeks and also ensure telephone chat on a regularly basis so as to settle properly or supporter planing to move to Brandon too.
3. Also inform your PO that you have also discussed getting an accommodation in Brandon which your supporter has agreed to do for you based on your choice of settlement.
4. Assure your PO that you are more than ready to economically add value to the city of Brandon.
Thank me later