Okay, I thought I would follow up here. So my husband and I spent $50 on the study guides for the Celpip and took the test again. My husband did very well this time and I, again, got only an 8 on the Writing section. I, again, asked for reevaluation. Since my husband is the main applicant, this is okay, but I am still upset about this. I studied their guides and did what they said to do, plus I am a native English speaker. I believe their instructions are not clear about what they are really looking for. They want something someone would hand into a teacher for a paper in High School, not examples of real letters or emails that you would write.
Scores first time: After 1st Reevaluation: Scores Second Time:
Me:
L12.........................L12.....................................L12
R11.........................R11....................................R11
W8..........................W8.....................................W8
S12.........................S12....................................S12
Husband:
L12........................L12.....................................L12
R12.......................R12.....................................R12
W7........................W8......................................W11
S12.......................S12.....................................S12
I took the exam thrice and with every attempt, although I improved on listening and reading, writing, just like you, never moved to 9 from 8. I too spent around 75 bucks on its study materials. It seems that CELPIP is very strict in marking the writing responses, which makes no sense because I know for sure that I improved my writing with every test but the score still stayed 8. IELTS is a way better choice than CELPIP, in my experience, if you can take it.