help!!!!Work experience letter job duties

[sophie2623]

My employer just gave me the work reference letter today, everything is good except the job duties.
This is 1111 Financial auditors and accountants based on website
Main duties
Financial auditors perform some or all of the following duties:

• Examine and analyze journal and ledger entries, bank statements, inventories, expenditures, tax returns and other accounting and financial records, documents and systems of individuals, departments within organizations, businesses or other establishments to ensure financial recording accuracy and compliance with established accounting standards, procedures and internal controls
• Prepare detailed reports on audit findings and make recommendations to improve individual or establishment's accounting and management practices
• Conduct field audits of businesses to ensure compliance with provisions of the Income Tax Act, Canadian Business Corporations Act or other statutory requirements
• May supervise other auditors or professionals in charge of accounting within client's establishment.

Accountants perform some or all of the following duties:

• Plan, set up and administer accounting systems and prepare financial information for individuals, departments within organizations, businesses and other establishments
• Examine accounting records and prepare financial statements and reports
• Develop and maintain cost finding, reporting and internal control procedures
• Examine financial accounts and records and prepare income tax returns from accounting records
• Analyze financial statements and reports and provide financial, business and tax advice
• May act as a trustee in bankruptcy proceedings
• May supervise and train articling students, other accountants or administrative technicians

However, my employer did not mention above detailed information. They just wrote:
Based on the national occupational classification website, xx job duties would coincide most closely to "1111 financial auditors and accountants". As a CPA candidate, XX completes financial statements for corporate or NPO clients which may be audits, review engagements or notice to readers. In connection with those files, she may complete corporate taxes, NPO or charity return. For individual clients, xx has completed personal tax returns. Given her experience, she is being asked to provide training to newer staff. In conjuction with her practical experience, xx is taking courses offered by CPA school pursuing her CPA designation.

Do you think this will be fine? or should i mention more job duties in LOE? I'm worried if CIC considers this is not enough

 

[sophie2623]

Can someone take a look at it and provide some advise

 

[sam3218]

Try to get reference letter according to the cic guidelines rather than complicating things. It should have detailed job descriptions that's for sure.

 

[DelPiero07]

Mentioning self-declared duties in your LOE adds no value to your application. You'll have to decide whether what you have is sufficient or whether you want to provide something more detailed.

 

[sophie2623]

Mentioning self-declared duties in your LOE adds no value to your application. You'll have to decide whether what you have is sufficient or whether you want to provide something more detailed.

Thank you! Cuz I’m doing this job, I kinda feel my company mentioned 70-80% of the duties based on CIC guideline but I don’t know as someone who is not in this field, if they think this letter is close to what CIC describes.

 

[sophie2623]

Try to get reference letter according to the cic guidelines rather than complicating things. It should have detailed job descriptions that's for sure.

Do you think my letter is too simplified? I just don’t know if VO will think this is enough