Hello All,
I am writing IELTS again on 09/08 as I got very less band in writing. So, I am practicing a lot these days. Can someone validate the below writing for a Task 2 question? It would be really helpful for me if anyone can provide their feedback where I need to improve.
Thank you in advance.
Regards,
Serg
Task 2 question:
The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved.
Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Response: