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Hi guys. Regarding essay, I want to take your opinion. I took this essay as outweigh essay and followed IELTS advantage structure. For example. Advantages outweigh the disadvantages due to several reasons.
Intro
BP1 advantages +example
BP2 more advantages + example
BP3 disadvantages
Conclusion ( restated my opinion about the advantages)

What you say about this kind of pattern?

I think you should be fine. Rest depends on the quality of writing. Good luck
 
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Sounds good. I see it as a well structured one.
I am having doubts on my response to the essay question.

Although I stated that there are more advantages than disadvantages associated with living in apartment block.
I included one body para for advantage ( including my opinion ) and another for drawbacks. Finally I concluded the essay stating that it is more advantageous to live in apartments compared to any minor drawbacks that can result from it.

I think the second body passage mentioning disadvantages was not required??

Any opinion guys??
 
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