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There have been total of four rejections. They are mentioned from most recent to earliest:
Country applied to: United Arab Emirates
Rejection Date: December 28, 2022
Visit Purpose: Tourism
Application No.: 22220143400992
Passport no of passport used: AA6108463 (Current passport)
Country applied to: United Arab Emirates
Rejection Date: December 1, 2022
Visit Purpose: Tourism
Application No.: 22233992244229
Passport no of passport used: AA6108463 (Current passport)
Country applied to: United States of America
Appointment Date: March 2, 2020
Appointment Place/Embassy: ISLAMABAD, Diplomatic Enclave, Ramna 5, Islamabad, Pakistan
Rejection Date: March 2, 2020
Purpose of travel: TOURISM
Passport no of passport used: AA6108463 (Current passport)
Confirmaon #: EN009AKGQY
Country applied to: United States of America
Appointment Date: July 8, 2015
Appointment Place/Embassy: ISLAMABAD, Diplomatic Enclave, Ramna 5, Islamabad, Pakistan
Rejection Date: July 8, 2015
Purpose of Travel: TOURISM
Passport no of passport used: AA6599072 (Expired passport)
Confirmation No.: UH004JI0QQ (Since this application is very old and due to data availability constraint in our record, there's a slight chance that the actual Confirmation No. only in this case might be different)
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Note - I have also visited Saudi Arabi, UAE (twice), Azarbaijan, and South Africa. UAE doesn't specify any reason for rejecting. US maybe does but I don't have any documents for that.
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There have been total of four rejections. They are mentioned from most recent to earliest:
Country applied to: United Arab Emirates
Rejection Date: December 28, 2022
Visit Purpose: Tourism
Application No.: 22220143400992
Passport no of passport used: AA6108463 (Current passport)
Country applied to: United Arab Emirates
Rejection Date: December 1, 2022
Visit Purpose: Tourism
Application No.: 22233992244229
Passport no of passport used: AA6108463 (Current passport)
Country applied to: United States of America
Appointment Date: March 2, 2020
Appointment Place/Embassy: ISLAMABAD, Diplomatic Enclave, Ramna 5, Islamabad, Pakistan
Rejection Date: March 2, 2020
Purpose of travel: TOURISM
Passport no of passport used: AA6108463 (Current passport)
Confirmaon #: EN009AKGQY
Country applied to: United States of America
Appointment Date: July 8, 2015
Appointment Place/Embassy: ISLAMABAD, Diplomatic Enclave, Ramna 5, Islamabad, Pakistan
Rejection Date: July 8, 2015
Purpose of Travel: TOURISM
Passport no of passport used: AA6599072 (Expired passport)
Confirmation No.: UH004JI0QQ (Since this application is very old and due to data availability constraint in our record, there's a slight chance that the actual Confirmation No. only in this case might be different)
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Note - I have also visited Saudi Arabi, UAE (twice), Azarbaijan, and South Africa. UAE doesn't specify any reason for rejecting. US maybe does but I don't have any documents for that.