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ruchit1234

Star Member
May 17, 2017
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From:

Ruchit Jayantibhai Patel

C-314, Kashi Vishveshshwar Township,

Opp: Bank of Baroda, Jetalpur Road,

Vadodara-390007, Gujarat, India.

Date: 18/06/2017


To,

The Visa Officer,

Canadian High commission

Bangalore, India.



REF: Previous file number S XXXXXX


SUB: Resubmission and justification of my study permit file under NON SPP category.


Dear Sir or Madam:


I am Ruchit Jayantibhai Patel from Vadodara, India.


This is with reference to my previous student permit that was refused on wrong grounds. According to you, "My proposed studies are not reasonable in light of one or more of my qualifications, previous studies, employment, level of establishment, language abilities, or my future prospects and plans.



I have selected 2 – years Post Graduate in Wireless Networking in Lambton College which is recognized globally and it will also help me to get job in India.



I have done Bachelor of Computer Application in November 2016 with Second Class. Lambton College has granted me admission in this program and eligibility of this program is Degree in Computer, over all 6.5 Bands in IELTS, this is completely related to my field of study and which will in the long run enhance my knowledge in the Wireless Networking related field. My proposed course of study is credible and related to my previous education and will enhance my career.


In a world of wireless communications shared between businesses, clients, and individuals, the Lambton College Wireless Networking two-year, four semester program will prepare me the skills needed for configuration and integration of wireless devices. I can expect to train on and learn from the most advanced technologies in the design, operation, and management of wireless networks.


Curriculum will focus on the collection and transfer of data through wireless related areas such as networks, servers, embedded systems and other wireless technologies. The final semester will enhance all learning outcomes through a support project or co-operative education work term. Working in a variety that support and manage wireless information networks or as wireless server entrepreneurs, graduates will learn the skills needed for many exciting careers.


Curriculum is kept current with the collaboration of our industry partners in the wireless field. I will utilize the latest technologies in small classes taught by industry leaders.


In the Wireless Networking field, there are several roles, I can work as a Wireless Engineer, Networking Engineer, Systems Engineer, Network Administrator, Network Support Engineer etc.



I am attaching herewith India Pay Scale employment prospects in my country for your ready Reference. After completion of this course, I can work with Cisco Systems Inc., HCL Technologies, Tata Communications Ltd, Wipro Technologies Ltd, Reliance Communications and many more.



About my Liquid Funds:


I have paid my first semester college tuition fees of 7105 CAD$ to Lambton College. I have deposited GIC amount 10,000 CAD$ in Scotia bank for my living expenses. My father is having Rs. 36, 27,306 in Fixed Deposits, Savings and Shares is equivalent to Cad 72546. So, I am having total provision of Funds in Cad 7105 + 10,000 + 72546 = Cad 89651 for my study and living expenses in Canada.



So, I request you to please reevaluate my application as your decision will help to gain Canadian educational experience which will help me in my profession.



If you have any question regarding my case, please feel free to contact me on my cell number or e-mail id.


Cell: 91–97127 20137 and E-mail: ruchitpatel65@gmail.com


Thanks,



Ruchit Jayantibhai Patel
 

Lmahida

Star Member
Jun 10, 2017
57
25
From:

Ruchit Jayantibhai Patel

C-314, Kashi Vishveshshwar Township,

Opp: Bank of Baroda, Jetalpur Road,

Vadodara-390007, Gujarat, India.

Date: 18/06/2017


To,

The Visa Officer,

Canadian High commission

Bangalore, India.



REF: Previous file number S XXXXXX


SUB: Resubmission and justification of my study permit file under NON SPP category.


Dear Sir or Madam:


I am Ruchit Jayantibhai Patel from Vadodara, India.


This is with reference to my previous student permit that was refused on wrong grounds. According to you, "My proposed studies are not reasonable in light of one or more of my qualifications, previous studies, employment, level of establishment, language abilities, or my future prospects and plans.



I have selected 2 – years Post Graduate in Wireless Networking in Lambton College which is recognized globally and it will also help me to get job in India.



I have done Bachelor of Computer Application in November 2016 with Second Class. Lambton College has granted me admission in this program and eligibility of this program is Degree in Computer, over all 6.5 Bands in IELTS, this is completely related to my field of study and which will in the long run enhance my knowledge in the Wireless Networking related field. My proposed course of study is credible and related to my previous education and will enhance my career.


In a world of wireless communications shared between businesses, clients, and individuals, the Lambton College Wireless Networking two-year, four semester program will prepare me the skills needed for configuration and integration of wireless devices. I can expect to train on and learn from the most advanced technologies in the design, operation, and management of wireless networks.


Curriculum will focus on the collection and transfer of data through wireless related areas such as networks, servers, embedded systems and other wireless technologies. The final semester will enhance all learning outcomes through a support project or co-operative education work term. Working in a variety that support and manage wireless information networks or as wireless server entrepreneurs, graduates will learn the skills needed for many exciting careers.


Curriculum is kept current with the collaboration of our industry partners in the wireless field. I will utilize the latest technologies in small classes taught by industry leaders.


In the Wireless Networking field, there are several roles, I can work as a Wireless Engineer, Networking Engineer, Systems Engineer, Network Administrator, Network Support Engineer etc.



I am attaching herewith India Pay Scale employment prospects in my country for your ready Reference. After completion of this course, I can work with Cisco Systems Inc., HCL Technologies, Tata Communications Ltd, Wipro Technologies Ltd, Reliance Communications and many more.



About my Liquid Funds:


I have paid my first semester college tuition fees of 7105 CAD$ to Lambton College. I have deposited GIC amount 10,000 CAD$ in Scotia bank for my living expenses. My father is having Rs. 36, 27,306 in Fixed Deposits, Savings and Shares is equivalent to Cad 72546. So, I am having total provision of Funds in Cad 7105 + 10,000 + 72546 = Cad 89651 for my study and living expenses in Canada.



So, I request you to please reevaluate my application as your decision will help to gain Canadian educational experience which will help me in my profession.



If you have any question regarding my case, please feel free to contact me on my cell number or e-mail id.


Cell: 91–97127 20137 and E-mail: ruchitpatel65@gmail.com


Thanks,



Ruchit Jayantibhai Patel
 

Lmahida

Star Member
Jun 10, 2017
57
25
Hi if this is ur second application u should have had caips note. U can come to know real reason n concentrate on covering those concern in second sop. Also please do not mention like on wrong grounds. Just address your points humbly. Rest all looks ok but without knowing real reason cant be sure
 

Lmahida

Star Member
Jun 10, 2017
57
25
Ur message is confusing. U need to show 1 year tution fees+living expenses. For second year u show how r u gonna arrange the funds for ex. Continuous income of parents.