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I would like to apply for a Visitor's permit to spend my Hajj's Holiday in Canada this coming September 09 to 14, 2016 (see attached Letter of Leave). Aside from exploring the city of Toronto and Niagara Falls (see itinerary below), the main purpose of my trip is for me to visit my grandparents whom I haven't seen firsthand for more than 10 years now since they migrated to Canada.
I applied for a Visitor's permit (App. No.: ) last June 6, 2016, online via xxxxxx, a Canadian-based law firm, but unfortunately, my application was refused due to my immigration status, purpose of visit, my employment status and personal assets as noted in the letter. I was disheartened by the decision, most especially my grandparents whom I haven't seen for years. I am grateful I was allowed again by my employer (xxxxxxxx) for a vacation and I grabbed all my might to reapply. I enclosed additional documents to include my certified and translated Resident Card/IQAMA, updated certificate of employment, my new contract extension, bank certificate with 6 months history, and a letter of my investment to a condominium unit in the Manila.
My grandfather (xxxxxxxx) sworn to defray for all the cost this trip may incur (see attached Invitation Letter and Bank Statements), however, I have declared my personal account which can be accessed internationally via an ATM Card for any inevitable or emergency expenses (See attached Bank Statement).
Furthermore, I have no intentions to permanently settle or overstay in Canada because I have work to attend to and I have sworn to my superior to go back to Riyadh in a timely manner (see attached Employment Certificate).
ITINERARY:
SEPTEMBER 9: Departure From Riyadh
SEPTEMBER 10: Expected Arrival in Toronto / Rest time
SEPTEMBER 11: Visit Greater Toronto Area with family
SEPTEMBER 12: Visit Niagara Falls with family
SEPTEMBER 13: Home with Family
SEPTEMBER 14: Departure from Toronto
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I would like to apply for a Visitor's permit to spend my Hajj's Holiday in Canada this coming September 09 to 14, 2016 (see attached Letter of Leave). Aside from exploring the city of Toronto and Niagara Falls (see itinerary below), the main purpose of my trip is for me to visit my grandparents whom I haven't seen firsthand for more than 10 years now since they migrated to Canada.
I applied for a Visitor's permit (App. No.: ) last June 6, 2016, online via xxxxxx, a Canadian-based law firm, but unfortunately, my application was refused due to my immigration status, purpose of visit, my employment status and personal assets as noted in the letter. I was disheartened by the decision, most especially my grandparents whom I haven't seen for years. I am grateful I was allowed again by my employer (xxxxxxxx) for a vacation and I grabbed all my might to reapply. I enclosed additional documents to include my certified and translated Resident Card/IQAMA, updated certificate of employment, my new contract extension, bank certificate with 6 months history, and a letter of my investment to a condominium unit in the Manila.
My grandfather (xxxxxxxx) sworn to defray for all the cost this trip may incur (see attached Invitation Letter and Bank Statements), however, I have declared my personal account which can be accessed internationally via an ATM Card for any inevitable or emergency expenses (See attached Bank Statement).
Furthermore, I have no intentions to permanently settle or overstay in Canada because I have work to attend to and I have sworn to my superior to go back to Riyadh in a timely manner (see attached Employment Certificate).
ITINERARY:
SEPTEMBER 9: Departure From Riyadh
SEPTEMBER 10: Expected Arrival in Toronto / Rest time
SEPTEMBER 11: Visit Greater Toronto Area with family
SEPTEMBER 12: Visit Niagara Falls with family
SEPTEMBER 13: Home with Family
SEPTEMBER 14: Departure from Toronto
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