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Study permit rejected - bachelor to college

salarrn

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Jul 23, 2019
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hi there

I am a 32 years old Iranian man, I have applied for a study permit in Aviron college for welding and fitting last week and they rejected my application after 7 days and these are their reasons :

• I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in
subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on the purpose of your visit.
• I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in
subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on your personal assets and financial status.

and these are my information about the course and my documents :

- cost of the program is 23,500 and it is 1800 hours

- I have a bachelor in metallurgy
- IELTS 6.5
- letter of acceptance from AVIRON college in welding and fitting ( this is a vocational school )
- my aunt's affidavit to pay all my expenses and my living place
- I own a house in Iran that as my ties in the home country
- I have worked for 6 years after my graduation
- I have attended some trade schools courses in my home country
- I also have invented something and have an accepted patent that is common with my bachelor and trade schools that I have attended
- Bank statement of 50,000 $CA
- CAQ

I have 2 and half months prior to the start of my course so I requested CAIPS note today and I want your opinions about my application

thank u so much
 

Humpholito24

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Sep 20, 2019
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hi there

I am a 32 years old Iranian man, I have applied for a study permit in Aviron college for welding and fitting last week and they rejected my application after 7 days and these are their reasons :

• I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in
subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on the purpose of your visit.
• I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in
subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on your personal assets and financial status.

and these are my information about the course and my documents :

- cost of the program is 23,500 and it is 1800 hours

- I have a bachelor in metallurgy
- IELTS 6.5
- letter of acceptance from AVIRON college in welding and fitting ( this is a vocational school )
- my aunt's affidavit to pay all my expenses and my living place
- I own a house in Iran that as my ties in the home country
- I have worked for 6 years after my graduation
- I have attended some trade schools courses in my home country
- I also have invented something and have an accepted patent that is common with my bachelor and trade schools that I have attended
- Bank statement of 50,000 $CA
- CAQ

I have 2 and half months prior to the start of my course so I requested CAIPS note today and I want your opinions about my application

thank u so much
Wait a minute, What are you going to study again? Is welding and fitting certificate or masters?

Financial assest, who is sponsoring you? where is the source of income? send all the document supporting source of income and why your aunt is paying for you.
 

salarrn

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Jul 23, 2019
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Wait a minute, What are you going to study again? Is welding and fitting certificate or masters?

Financial assest, who is sponsoring you? where is the source of income? send all the document supporting source of income and why your aunt is paying for you.
hi, welding and fitting is vocational diploma and is in common with my experience so, I have the whole money to pay my expenses but I also have my aunt support in an affidavit that includes shes bank statement and investments
 

Humpholito24

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Sep 20, 2019
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hi, welding and fitting is vocational diploma and is in common with my experience so, I have the whole money to pay my expenses but I also have my aunt support in an affidavit that includes shes bank statement and investments
That's my point. You have a bachelor and you going for vocational diploma. VO would be like why? Explain very much why you chose Vocational diploma and not Masters. For income, explain to VO the source of income that you have enough to take care for tuition and during stay.
 

salarrn

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Jul 23, 2019
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That's my point. You have a bachelor and you going for vocational diploma. VO would be like why? Explain very much why you chose Vocational diploma and not Masters. For income, explain to VO the source of income that you have enough to take care for tuition and during stay.
is it possible for you to read my SOP and say your opinion ?
 

salarrn

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Jul 23, 2019
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you have already worked for 6 years, theres no need to take a college diploma when you alr have a bachelor and doing fine.

furthermore you are from iran and that might be another reason against you although they cant say it for obvious reasons.

lastly, your aunt is not a close relative and she may in the end choose not to sponsor you no matter what she claims. what matters more is your financial ability to do so. and why are you intending to spend a lot of money coming to canada when you already lack money in the first place?

Will you really return to iran and earn crap wages back there (compared to canada) after spending so much money on a college cert?

Do you really think the visa officials have no idea as to what your true intentions really are?
you have already worked for 6 years, there's no need to take a college diploma when you alr have a bachelor and doing fine.
I'm doing fine with that vocational study I have done in IRAN not what I have learned in uni

furthermore you are from iran and that might be another reason against you although they cant say it for obvious reasons
. i think this is the main issue

lastly, your aunt is not a close relative and she may in the end choose not to sponsor you no matter what she claims. what matters more is your financial ability to do so. and why are you intending to spend a lot of money coming to canada when you already lack money in the first place?
I'm not lacking money I already have more than enough money but the problem is that I have it in cash as dollar but it seems i must change it to my home country currency and show them, I already have approximate 300,000 $CA

Will you really return to iran and earn crap wages back there (compared to Canada) after spending so much money on a college cert?
actually in the country around Persian gulf they really pay attention to resumes with Canadian exp and Canadian DVS, this is my main reason cause it is more likely to me cause I can stay at my aunts home for my study time

Do you really think the visa officials have no idea as to what your true intentions really are? my real intention is to do welding in vocation study because we don't have any kind of master degrees in welding in Canada as I know, and it's more practical than academic study
 

salarrn

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Jul 23, 2019
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thank you so much for what you are doing to me , it so kind to me

Dear Sir /Madam,

I would like to be issued a student visa in order to pursue my education in Canada. Aviron Technical Institute of Montreal granted me admission as a full-time student to pursue vocational studies in their Welding and Fitting program and I was issued a CAQ from the Government of Quebec.

I wish to pursue vocational studies in welding at Aviron Technical Institute for the following reasons:

In 2014, when I obtained my bachelor degree in Industrial Metallurgy at The Azad University of Iran, I realized it did not really fulfill my interests. I felt that my knowledge level lacked both depth and breadth but I especially deplored the lack of practical experience which I realized was the part of the work which interested me the most.

Therefore, instead of looking for a job as an engineer, I took a job as a Sales Representative in an engineering firm called RAMTEC. While working there, it took me almost two years to identify more clearly my interests in the field of metallurgy; in order to do so, I took specialized and practical courses to gather more practical knowledge and skills. For example, I attended a “Cathodic Protection Level I and II” course provided by the Iranian Corrosion Association (ICA) and a training program of “Qualification in Non-Destructive Testing Method”.

After completing these practical and vocational courses, I worked for 2 months as a volunteer in the division of Cathodic Protection of the engineering firm called RATA TAJHIZ NOVIN PARS and after that, on November 2017, I was offered a job as a junior Corrosion Technician in that company where I am working until now.

While working for RATA TAJHIZ NOVIN PARS I have invented a device (cathodic protector of 1800 injector engine) for which I sought an invention/patent certificate and, on the basis of my experience and knowledge in corrosion prevention, I have carried out some private projects to evaluate the feasibility of launching my own business.

The technical aspect of my field of study interests me the most and the reason for my desire to complete a Welding and Fitting program at Aviron Technical Institute is that I am convinced that this program will help me to acquire unique skills while allowing me to improve my current know-how as I continue my journey in the field in my home country.

Since Canadian diplomas have a worldwide recognition and given the value and high quality of Canadian vocational diplomas, I strongly believe that this opportunity will increase my chances to excel in the welding industry and develop my own business in Iran. A Canadian diploma will obviously have a positive influence in my career and in the successful launching of my own business in the corrosion and welding industry.

I have only completed three credits in welding during my studies and have no field experience. By completing this program, I intend to combine my knowledge in corrosion and welding in order to prevent the corrosion in welded points, welded joints and to better understand the behaviour of welded metals in corrosive solutions (substances). My ultimate objective is to diagnose problems and find solutions to the greatest extent possible. Hopefully, this will enable me to work not only in my home country but also in the oil industry of the surrounding countries of the Persian Gulf, where skills like welding in metallurgy are very much in demand.

Aviron is a reputable technical school which was recommended to me by a friend of my father. They have been in business for more than 70 years and by thoroughly researching their website, I found out they have excellent and modern equipment and facilities to teach their students. The location of the school is only 22 km from where I would be residing (at my aunt Firouzeh Rouhani Nejad).

The cost of the program is $23,950 CAN$. It will be partially paid with the funds available in my bank account. I also have the full financial support of my aunt who is undertaking to pay my tuition fees; her banking information and her affidavit to support me are submitted in support of the present application. I will have health coverage with the Blue Cross.

Studying abroad and being far from my parents and brother will be challenging emotionally but it is with hopes of building a prosperous business and professional life in Iran in my field of interest.

My current employer RATA TAJHIZ NOVIN PARS is supporting my efforts to improve my skills and knowledge by completing a vocational program abroad and has assured me that not only I will be able to continue my work for the firm upon my return but that I could expect a promotion.

I am also buying a home in Iran before beginning my studies in Canada, simply to have my money invested while I am away and studying in Canada.

Please find enclosed the following documents in support of my application for a student visa:

1. Bachelor's degree in the field of Metallurgy and Materials Engineering – Industrial Metallurgy.

2. Certificate for “Cathodic Protection Level I and II”

3. Certificate for “Qualification in Non-Destructive Testing Method”

4. Three letters from RATA TAJHIZ NOVIN PARS dated 31 August 2019

5. Letter from RAMTEC dated 8 June 2019

6. Patent certificate dated 13 January 2019

7. Installation service contract dated 8 December 2018 (a private contract I undertook to evaluate the feasibility of launching my own business)

8. Vehicle ownership identification

9. Deed of my house

10. My Bank Statement which shows a balance of more than 52,000$CAN

I wish to assure you that I will respect all the conditions of my stay in Canada. I have absolutely no intention to stay in Canada beyond my authorized period of stay.

For all of the above reasons, I would greatly appreciate that my visa application is given favorable consideration.






Salar Rohani Nejad
 

Humpholito24

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Sep 20, 2019
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thank you so much for what you are doing to me , it so kind to me

Dear Sir /Madam,

I would like to be issued a student visa in order to pursue my education in Canada. Aviron Technical Institute of Montreal granted me admission as a full-time student to pursue vocational studies in their Welding and Fitting program and I was issued a CAQ from the Government of Quebec.

I wish to pursue vocational studies in welding at Aviron Technical Institute for the following reasons:

In 2014, when I obtained my bachelor degree in Industrial Metallurgy at The Azad University of Iran, I realized it did not really fulfill my interests. I felt that my knowledge level lacked both depth and breadth but I especially deplored the lack of practical experience which I realized was the part of the work which interested me the most.

Therefore, instead of looking for a job as an engineer, I took a job as a Sales Representative in an engineering firm called RAMTEC. While working there, it took me almost two years to identify more clearly my interests in the field of metallurgy; in order to do so, I took specialized and practical courses to gather more practical knowledge and skills. For example, I attended a “Cathodic Protection Level I and II” course provided by the Iranian Corrosion Association (ICA) and a training program of “Qualification in Non-Destructive Testing Method”.

After completing these practical and vocational courses, I worked for 2 months as a volunteer in the division of Cathodic Protection of the engineering firm called RATA TAJHIZ NOVIN PARS and after that, on November 2017, I was offered a job as a junior Corrosion Technician in that company where I am working until now.

While working for RATA TAJHIZ NOVIN PARS I have invented a device (cathodic protector of 1800 injector engine) for which I sought an invention/patent certificate and, on the basis of my experience and knowledge in corrosion prevention, I have carried out some private projects to evaluate the feasibility of launching my own business.

The technical aspect of my field of study interests me the most and the reason for my desire to complete a Welding and Fitting program at Aviron Technical Institute is that I am convinced that this program will help me to acquire unique skills while allowing me to improve my current know-how as I continue my journey in the field in my home country.

Since Canadian diplomas have a worldwide recognition and given the value and high quality of Canadian vocational diplomas, I strongly believe that this opportunity will increase my chances to excel in the welding industry and develop my own business in Iran. A Canadian diploma will obviously have a positive influence in my career and in the successful launching of my own business in the corrosion and welding industry.

I have only completed three credits in welding during my studies and have no field experience. By completing this program, I intend to combine my knowledge in corrosion and welding in order to prevent the corrosion in welded points, welded joints and to better understand the behaviour of welded metals in corrosive solutions (substances). My ultimate objective is to diagnose problems and find solutions to the greatest extent possible. Hopefully, this will enable me to work not only in my home country but also in the oil industry of the surrounding countries of the Persian Gulf, where skills like welding in metallurgy are very much in demand.

Aviron is a reputable technical school which was recommended to me by a friend of my father. They have been in business for more than 70 years and by thoroughly researching their website, I found out they have excellent and modern equipment and facilities to teach their students. The location of the school is only 22 km from where I would be residing (at my aunt Firouzeh Rouhani Nejad).

The cost of the program is $23,950 CAN$. It will be partially paid with the funds available in my bank account. I also have the full financial support of my aunt who is undertaking to pay my tuition fees; her banking information and her affidavit to support me are submitted in support of the present application. I will have health coverage with the Blue Cross.

Studying abroad and being far from my parents and brother will be challenging emotionally but it is with hopes of building a prosperous business and professional life in Iran in my field of interest.

My current employer RATA TAJHIZ NOVIN PARS is supporting my efforts to improve my skills and knowledge by completing a vocational program abroad and has assured me that not only I will be able to continue my work for the firm upon my return but that I could expect a promotion.

I am also buying a home in Iran before beginning my studies in Canada, simply to have my money invested while I am away and studying in Canada.

Please find enclosed the following documents in support of my application for a student visa:

1. Bachelor's degree in the field of Metallurgy and Materials Engineering – Industrial Metallurgy.

2. Certificate for “Cathodic Protection Level I and II”

3. Certificate for “Qualification in Non-Destructive Testing Method”

4. Three letters from RATA TAJHIZ NOVIN PARS dated 31 August 2019

5. Letter from RAMTEC dated 8 June 2019

6. Patent certificate dated 13 January 2019

7. Installation service contract dated 8 December 2018 (a private contract I undertook to evaluate the feasibility of launching my own business)

8. Vehicle ownership identification

9. Deed of my house

10. My Bank Statement which shows a balance of more than 52,000$CAN

I wish to assure you that I will respect all the conditions of my stay in Canada. I have absolutely no intention to stay in Canada beyond my authorized period of stay.

For all of the above reasons, I would greatly appreciate that my visa application is given favorable consideration.






Salar Rohani Nejad
Having a bachelor degree, explain why you chose diploma as you could have opted for masters in Wielding and fitting. Then, is there a lot of job opportunity in Iran that the diploma will help you? Because, to my understanding, I can't just go back home and start a business since I will need capital. You can mention something like, there is job opportunity where you can use your skills then start your own wielding business.

Then why is your aunt sponsoring you? She may one day wake up and say enough! Why not transfer the amount to your dad or mum so that it can show close relationship or explain further why your aunt.

The part you saying leaving your family will be emotional, in my opinion omit that part. Not necessary. You can mention your family taking part in supporting your business, it will prove family ties in your country.
 

salarrn

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Jul 23, 2019
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Having a bachelor degree, explain why you chose diploma as you could have opted for masters in Wielding and fitting. Then, is there a lot of job opportunity in Iran that the diploma will help you? Because, to my understanding, I can't just go back home and start a business since I will need capital. You can mention something like, there is job opportunity where you can use your skills then start your own wielding business.

Then why is your aunt sponsoring you? She may one day wake up and say enough! Why not transfer the amount to your dad or mum so that it can show close relationship or explain further why your aunt.

The part you saying leaving your family will be emotional, in my opinion omit that part. Not necessary. You can mention your family taking part in supporting your business, it will prove family ties in your country.
thank you so much , i will check my future sop with you if its ok
 

salarrn

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Jul 23, 2019
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hi again, I have received my officer note, it would be very nice to have your comment about it
this is the note :
I have reviewed the application. taking the applicant's plan of studies into account, the applicant does not appear to be sufficiently well established that the proposed studies would be a reasonable expense. the applicant's plan of studies appears vague and poorly documented, given the PAs previous education and work history, their motivation to pursue studies in Canada at this point does not seem reasonable. I am not satisfied that the purpose of the study is reasonable, in view of the fact that similar programs are available closer to the applicant's place of residence for more competitive tuition fees and the benefits to the applicant of taking

the program do not appear to outweigh the costs, weighing the factors in this application, I'm not satisfied that the applicant will depart Canada at the end of the period authorized for their stay.
 

Humpholito24

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Sep 20, 2019
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hi again, I have received my officer note, it would be very nice to have your comment about it
this is the note :
I have reviewed the application. taking the applicant's plan of studies into account, the applicant does not appear to be sufficiently well established that the proposed studies would be a reasonable expense. the applicant's plan of studies appears vague and poorly documented, given the PAs previous education and work history, their motivation to pursue studies in Canada at this point does not seem reasonable. I am not satisfied that the purpose of the study is reasonable, in view of the fact that similar programs are available closer to the applicant's place of residence for more competitive tuition fees and the benefits to the applicant of taking

the program do not appear to outweigh the costs, weighing the factors in this application, I'm not satisfied that the applicant will depart Canada at the end of the period authorized for their stay.
Seems like you did not have or show enough funds plus your future goals is not clear to VO. You need to revisit your SOP and set your future plan well. The sop mentions it will be partially paid the fees, so VO thought you have no enough fund. You will need to show fund of 33k 23k for tuition and 10k for expenses
 

ardakk91

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Oct 2, 2020
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hi again, I have received my officer note, it would be very nice to have your comment about it
this is the note :
I have reviewed the application. taking the applicant's plan of studies into account, the applicant does not appear to be sufficiently well established that the proposed studies would be a reasonable expense. the applicant's plan of studies appears vague and poorly documented, given the PAs previous education and work history, their motivation to pursue studies in Canada at this point does not seem reasonable. I am not satisfied that the purpose of the study is reasonable, in view of the fact that similar programs are available closer to the applicant's place of residence for more competitive tuition fees and the benefits to the applicant of taking

the program do not appear to outweigh the costs, weighing the factors in this application, I'm not satisfied that the applicant will depart Canada at the end of the period authorized for their stay.
Did you receive your study permit? What you have done since then? I also got rejected a month ago. I have bachelor in Aerospace, but want to change to software development and applied to CNA. I don't know what to do, should I invest on Masters, but I want to change my career, I cannot apply to CS Masters because I don't have prerequisite.