Hiya!
Please help me to improve my re-application:
I applied for SP+SOWP in 2020 with PG diploma program from GBC college.
Education: hold Bachelor's in Management (5 yrs, language Russian)
Ielts: 7.0
Location: Dubai
POF: 39.5K CAD
Employment: official employment from UAE company.
I have been rejected based on below GCMS notes:
I have reviewed the application. After considering the applicant's academic and professional background, their financial situation as well as their planned studies and explanation provided to it, i am not satisfied that the applicant is a genuine student who will pursue studies in Canada. The stated benefits of their intended studies do not seem warrant the cost and difficulty of undertaking foreign education. I am therefore not satisfied that the applicant will leave Canada at the end of the period authorized for their stay. Refused.
I understand that I made such mistakes as:
1) Added a big amount of money (5K USD) in one day which has been reflected in the bank statement;
2) Intended to pursue PG diploma; program while holding 5yrs Bachelors
3) added my spouse to my application;
4) Choose HRM program while working in business administration
5) Applied not from my home country
Soon I am about to reapply most probably with MBA program from UCW university from where I received scholarship in amount of 10K CAD. Total tuition fee of this program is 40K CAD.
I have taken GMAT in 2020 (510), will have POF of about 45K CAD. Won't add my spouse to my application but thinking about to add my toddler son. I will also show my property worths of 70K USD. Additionally l am officially employed in my home country.
Am I improving my application in the right direction? What else can you advise?
Thank you for your time!
Would be grateful for your advise: @Naturgrl @canuck78 and other prodigies
Please help me to improve my re-application:
I applied for SP+SOWP in 2020 with PG diploma program from GBC college.
Education: hold Bachelor's in Management (5 yrs, language Russian)
Ielts: 7.0
Location: Dubai
POF: 39.5K CAD
Employment: official employment from UAE company.
I have been rejected based on below GCMS notes:
I have reviewed the application. After considering the applicant's academic and professional background, their financial situation as well as their planned studies and explanation provided to it, i am not satisfied that the applicant is a genuine student who will pursue studies in Canada. The stated benefits of their intended studies do not seem warrant the cost and difficulty of undertaking foreign education. I am therefore not satisfied that the applicant will leave Canada at the end of the period authorized for their stay. Refused.
I understand that I made such mistakes as:
1) Added a big amount of money (5K USD) in one day which has been reflected in the bank statement;
2) Intended to pursue PG diploma; program while holding 5yrs Bachelors
3) added my spouse to my application;
4) Choose HRM program while working in business administration
5) Applied not from my home country
Soon I am about to reapply most probably with MBA program from UCW university from where I received scholarship in amount of 10K CAD. Total tuition fee of this program is 40K CAD.
I have taken GMAT in 2020 (510), will have POF of about 45K CAD. Won't add my spouse to my application but thinking about to add my toddler son. I will also show my property worths of 70K USD. Additionally l am officially employed in my home country.
Am I improving my application in the right direction? What else can you advise?
Thank you for your time!
Would be grateful for your advise: @Naturgrl @canuck78 and other prodigies