Re applying trv bryanna

[Ajit1975]

general format. please suggest should i move with this format

I Ajit Singh holding Indian passport no. xxxx with my xxxx holding Indian passport no. .... reapplying as my visitor visa was refused for following reasons:
1. Travel history
2. Finanance
3. Purpose of visit
4. Back home ties.
Here I have tried to provide detail information for all the reasons due to my visa was refused.

1.Travel history
I am traveling from 1998 and had never overstayed in any country. these are the countries i had traveled to
USA,U.K,FRANCE,HOLLAND,AUSTRIA,CHINA,BANGALDESH

2.Financial status.
Me and wife bank statement stamped by bank manager are attached for your consideration. All statement accumulates to 17000 CAD and this amount is generated through legal way and not borrowed from any relative or friend.

AJIT SINGH MANDEEP
XXXX BANK 2000CAD XXXX BANK 3000CAD
ADC BANK 6000CAD DDC BANK 2000CAD
BABC BANK 4000CAD




Home ties.
My biggest asset is my parent’s and my children. children are not accompany us and my parents will look after them until we come back. Apart from family net worth of more than 2 million CAD (liquid and fixed assets) and my running business. I am law abide person and love to live as business person legally. I have attached the property papers valued by government approved property valuer.

Purpose of visit
At present I am the proprietor of
ABC WORK
XXXXXX INDUSTRIAL AREA,
XXXXX
10-12 persons are working under me
My company specialize in manufacturing machines, moulds, dies & fixtures required to manufacture any type of batteries e.g. car/truck batteries.
My concern is registered in 2005 with company act of Indian government.

As I have shown my intention of settling in Canada (for quality of life) through the business entrepreneur category. To register with the province in said category a short brief business plan is required once you have submitted the plan you are not authorized to make changes in the business plan. Submitting business plan includes
The number of persons to be hired,
specify region in which u are going to established the business and what are the risk factors involve etc.
Nature of the business
buying running business or establishing new

So my purpose of visit is to explore the viability of business and the nature of business to be established or purchased the running business.
Mr. Mak from TYX IMMIGRATION SERVICE registered with for IRCC no. XXX will help me in exploring the business ideas and help in creating business plan.

MY ITINERARY IN CANADA
SIX DAYS in BC
SIX IN MANITOBA
SIX IN ONTARIO

I request for grant of visitor visa so that i am able to submit the strong business plan.
thanks

 

[Bryanna]

Hi Ajit,

I have replied to your PM.... do check your inbox

Also, post the list of evidence that you will be submitting.... separately for yourself and your wife. Do go through the suggestions posted to your queries earlier


Cheers

 

[simplyaddo]

I don't want to sound offensive, but you may want to get the grammar and general structure of the sentences rechecked. It helps if the letters are clear, concise and easy to follow.

 

[bellaluna]

IMO, he has a bigger problem: intending to be an entrepreneur by showing only CAD 17,000. That's just a little above the low-income cut-off. I also get the impression from the CIC website that the federal entrepreneur and investor programs have been terminated, so his purpose of travel is poorly thought out.

 

[Bryanna]

IMO, he has a bigger problem

bellaluna and simplyaddo.... I think the OP's new TRV application has some new red flags (besides the old ones).... and not just incorrect grammar or insufficient funds to be an entrepreneur.

Perhaps, he's referring to the Start-up Visa Program?


In another thread, he stated his bank balance was in excess of CAD 50,000 for his previous TRV application. The current bank balance of CAD 17,000 is a steep drop in his personal finances in a short period of time = Red Flag No.1

As I have shown my intention of settling in Canada (for quality of life) through the business entrepreneur category.

= Red Flag No.2

SIX DAYS in BC
SIX IN MANITOBA
SIX IN ONTARIO

To which province is he applying? And which immigration program?


I suggest he must give some serious thought to the purpose of his visit + quality and type of documentation/ evidence + his financial situation, etc.... instead of submitting another TRV application in a hurry

 

[bellaluna]

@Bryanna: Yeah I think he brought it down to 17000 when you pointed out in the other thread that his 50000 balance wasn't justifiable.

The SVP requires support from an angel investor in Canada, so if that's his intent, I'd imagine he needs proof of his appointments with these investors during his intended visit.

I suggest he must give some serious thought to the purpose of his visit + quality and type of documentation/ evidence + his financial situation, etc.... instead of submitting another TRV application in a hurry

Quoted for emphasis to OP. I get that entrepreneurs are supposed to take risks and see possibilities where there aren't any, but the plan just doesn't seem realistic.

 

[Andre_Smol]

Personally, I think it is much too confusing and unclear to serve as a basis for TRV.

It is perfectly fine to visit Canada for establishing a business down the road, but since most provinces require a business plan or meetings with business immigration officers, or similar steps like investments in the province, a clear goal would help that application a lot.

He could make appointments with business or investor services in Canada and provide those as a clear indication that he is following a certain province's business immigration requirements, trying to meet all the needed criteria to submit an application for business immigration in one province.

For example, Manitoba requires the following steps:


To qualify for the MPNP-B, interested applicants must:
have a minimum verifiable personal net worth of CDN$350,000;
have a minimum three years of successful business ownership and management experience or a minimum three years of executive-level experience as senior manager of a business; and
score a minimum of 60 points in the Adaptability Assessment Matrix.

The applicant must also be prepared to:
attend an interview with a MPNP-B officer;
make an Eligible Business Investment in Manitoba; and
reside in Manitoba along with his/her dependent family members.

The applicant may have to:
conduct an Exploratory Visit to Manitoba. The applicant must provide a visit report and other documents to demonstrate the research conducted during this visit (please see details on page 14); and
provide the results of a language competency test to demonstrate language proficiency.

http://www.gov.mb.ca/jec/invest/pnp-b/e_eligibility.html


I think, if business immigration is the ultimate goal, the application should show the appropriate steps are being followed to be able to apply for business immigration down the road.

As it stands, the application is so broad and general, it simply doesnt appear to have a specific goal in mind.

 

[Bryanna]

I think there's lack of clarity.... in thought, process and documentation.... which can otherwise help the OP to achieve his immigration goals.

Like I mentioned in another post, his TRV application seems to be a mishmash of paperwork without doing any homework.

I could be wrong.... perhaps, the OP is possibly being lead down the garden path by an agent..... without the OP verifying whether the immigration program exists.... or what it takes to qualify/process for a Start-up Visa (??)..... or what it takes to prepare a solid TRV application (at the very least)