Please check my SOP

[drost]

Hello,

I and my wife refused visa 3 times.
Now We wish to apply again.
We found on this forum that sop play a big role in application.
We rewrite it fully.

Can anybody check it?
I can send it to email.

Thanks in advance

 

[rabrakha]

Hello,

I and my wife refused visa 3 times.
Now We wish to apply again.
We found on this forum that sop play a big role in application.
We rewrite it fully.

Can anybody check it?
I can send it to email.

Thanks in advance

thapar0007@gmail.com

 

[drost]

Thanks

 

[rabrakha]

Thanks

check ur inbox i hv replied

 

[Swathi.life]

u can post it here, may be u can get more inputs..since it is rejected 3 times, it is good u get more inputs..

 

[twentyone]

Do not post it here! People may copy it you may jeopardise your visa chances due to plagiarism as its a serious offence in Canada. Send it through a personal message to only people you can trust!

 

[drost]

check ur inbox i hv replied

I see. Thanks.

 

[drost]

Do not post it here! People may copy it you may jeopardise your visa chances due to plagiarism as its a serious offence in Canada. Send it through a personal message to only people you can trust!

Can I send it to you?

 

[Swathi.life]

Do not post it here! People may copy it you may jeopardise your visa chances due to plagiarism as its a serious offence in Canada. Send it through a personal message to only people you can trust!

I agree with u , at the same time how much can some1 copy other's SOP ? every1's studies, career paths , family background are different..

i only said that cos it has been rejected 3 times..its upto him now, if he thinks it is wise he can post it..

 

[drost]

I agree with u , at the same time how much can some1 copy other's SOP ? every1's studies, career paths , family background are different..

i only said that cos it has been rejected 3 times..its upto him now, if he thinks it is wise he can post it..

On this reason I do not wish to share my sop public.

 

[twentyone]

I agree with u , at the same time how much can some1 copy other's SOP ? every1's studies, career paths , family background are different..

i only said that cos it has been rejected 3 times..its upto him now, if he thinks it is wise he can post it..

I agree but some people here literally beg for SOP's. I'm sure they will copy whole sentences and para's if not the whole document.

 

[bensuomi]

Bro your sop help you to avoid interview,its very important,my visa has been approved,don,t write long sop,be simple and concise

it should answer this basic questions

your goals and aspirations
why you want to study in canada and not your home country
why do you want to travel with your family and how will it contribute to the success of your studies
How is the course relevant to your career development.

And you should have applied first and after six months apply for your wife,in most case they reject application of couple applying for student visa

 

[drost]

Bro your sop help you to avoid interview,its very important,my visa has been approved,don,t write long sop,be simple and concise

it should answer this basic questions

your goals and aspirations
why you want to study in canada and not your home country
why do you want to travel with your family and how will it contribute to the success of your studies
How is the course relevant to your career development.

And you should have applied first and after six months apply for your wife,in most case they reject application of couple applying for student visa

My sop is a little more than 1.5 page.
Previously I do not pay attention to sop, but after 3 refuse, this forum and people, who applied from my country, I found that sop play a big role.
We do not have Canada embassy in my country that is why I think sop is the only one possible way to contact with VO.

 

[Swathi.life]

My sop is a little more than 1.5 page.
Previously I do not pay attention to sop, but after 3 refuse, this forum and people, who applied from my country, I found that sop play a big role.
We do not have Canada embassy in my country that is why I think sop is the only one possible way to contact with VO.

in your case..it is fine if SOP is more than 1.5 page or even 2 pages..

i applied for higher studies after 7 years of completing my undergraduate..no one told me to put an SOP in my visa file, but i did it and it was 2 pages long..

because i have enough to explain - that why i m going for studies after this long time , my career goals, family background,what i was doing for 7 years..it is better to explain everything to the VO than just submitting documents and leaving it for his/her imagination

 

[drost]

in your case..it is fine if SOP is more than 1.5 page or even 2 pages..

i applied for higher studies after 7 years of completing my undergraduate..no one told me to put an SOP in my visa file, but i did it and it was 2 pages long..

because i have enough to explain - that why i m going for studies after this long time , my career goals, family background,what i was doing for 7 years..it is better to explain everything to the VO than just submitting documents and leaving it for his/her imagination

Did you get visa?