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Date: 08-Jun-2022
To,
The Honorable Consular,
Dear Sir / Madam,
I, XXXXXXX, Passport Number XXXXX would like to travel to Toronto with my spouse and 3 children as tourist from XX/XX/2022 until XX/XX/2022. Therefore, my family and I would like to obtain Canadian Tourist visa.
I am working as xxxxxxxxxx in XXXXXXXX. (www.xxxxxxxxxxx.net) since December XXXX and drawing a monthly salary of XXXX QAR (Approximately XXX CAD).
In the past, I have traveled to United States twice in August XXXX on a training program and in December XXXX for leisure. I have attached the colored copy of my United States Visa in my documents.
I have strong ties with the State of XXXXXXXX and would return back here as my mother and my siblings live here as permanent residents.
I will be taking care of our expenses during our stay in Canada as I hold more than XXXXXX USD into my USD Saving account in XXXXXX Bank. Following will be my itinerary:
Aug 11 – Travel from XXXX to Toronto.
Aug 12 – Arrival in Canada and rest in the hotel.
Aug 13 – Visiting CN Tower.
Aug 14 – Sightseeing in Downtown Toronto.
Aug 15 – Visiting Niagra Falls and spending night in a nearby Hotel.
Aug 16 – Rest day or Shopping in Toronto
Aug 17 – Visiting Royal Ontario Museum
Aug 18 – Visiting Entertainment District
Aug 19 – Visiting Toronto Zoo
Aug 20 – Rest day or Shopping in Toronto
Aug 21 – Wandering through St. Lawrence Market
Aug 22 – Visiting Casa Loma
Aug 23– Shopping at Eaton Center
Aug 24 – Rest day
Aug 25 – Visiting Kensington Market
Aug 26 – Visiting High Park
Aug 27 – Rest day
Aug 28 – Travel back to XXXX
My family and I shall be very grateful to you if you approve our application.
Yours Sincerely,
XXXXXXXX.
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Date: 08-Jun-2022
To,
The Honorable Consular,
Subject: Application for Canadian Tourist Visa.
Dear Sir / Madam,
I, XXXXXXX, Passport Number XXXXX would like to travel to Toronto with my spouse and 3 children as tourist from XX/XX/2022 until XX/XX/2022. Therefore, my family and I would like to obtain Canadian Tourist visa.
I am working as xxxxxxxxxx in XXXXXXXX. (www.xxxxxxxxxxx.net) since December XXXX and drawing a monthly salary of XXXX QAR (Approximately XXX CAD).
In the past, I have traveled to United States twice in August XXXX on a training program and in December XXXX for leisure. I have attached the colored copy of my United States Visa in my documents.
I have strong ties with the State of XXXXXXXX and would return back here as my mother and my siblings live here as permanent residents.
I will be taking care of our expenses during our stay in Canada as I hold more than XXXXXX USD into my USD Saving account in XXXXXX Bank. Following will be my itinerary:
Aug 11 – Travel from XXXX to Toronto.
Aug 12 – Arrival in Canada and rest in the hotel.
Aug 13 – Visiting CN Tower.
Aug 14 – Sightseeing in Downtown Toronto.
Aug 15 – Visiting Niagra Falls and spending night in a nearby Hotel.
Aug 16 – Rest day or Shopping in Toronto
Aug 17 – Visiting Royal Ontario Museum
Aug 18 – Visiting Entertainment District
Aug 19 – Visiting Toronto Zoo
Aug 20 – Rest day or Shopping in Toronto
Aug 21 – Wandering through St. Lawrence Market
Aug 22 – Visiting Casa Loma
Aug 23– Shopping at Eaton Center
Aug 24 – Rest day
Aug 25 – Visiting Kensington Market
Aug 26 – Visiting High Park
Aug 27 – Rest day
Aug 28 – Travel back to XXXX
My family and I shall be very grateful to you if you approve our application.
Yours Sincerely,
XXXXXXXX.