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bali.singh

Hero Member
Jun 19, 2013
440
5
New Delhi
Visa Office......
CHC Delhi
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
App. Filed.......
04/07/2013
IELTS Request
6.5 Overall not less than 6
VISA ISSUED...
31/7/2013
LANDED..........
12Aug2013
Statement Of Purpose
I am writing this letter with a request to re-consider my Visa application which has been rejected by you on grounds that my previous education is not reasonable with the program I have chosen to study at Conestoga College.
As you will from the attached certificates, I was doing Bachelors in Digital Animation and Visual Effects in Filmmaking (3 year degree course) at Reliance Big Aims Academy, Delhi, as I was having keen Interest in Television and Broadcasting. But I was not getting practical demonstrations and apt theoretical knowledge as required. I did my 12th from Science stream as my parents insisted and was their choice for me.
While studying and talking to overseas students, I found that the skills I had acquired at Reliance Big Aims were not adequate to meet the requirement for advance Television-broadcasting, so I can be up to date in this competitive world. My dad and I did a lot of research talking to people in the animation industry as well as researching on the internet, According to my research until now, advance Television-broadcasting at Indian Institution does not exist. I wanted to study at institution which gives me advance knowledge and get exposed to international methods. I looked at websites and did comparisons of many reputed colleges for past Six Months. After all of my research I found that the intensive two year curriculum at Conestoga College met all of my requirements.
Conestoga College is highly acknowledged by all the broadcasting offices in India as well. I was confident that I would get the best education from world class faculty at Conestoga College. The mounting competition among the international and domestic corporations has laid down new rules of the game. When I’ll be done with the Certificate at Conestoga college Graduates find employment as videographers, video editors, creative writers, audio and video production personnel, video journalists, performers, directors, sound recordists , as well as other pre and post production positions. Therefore, I am confident in getting good job offers on my return to India because India has one the world's biggest Cinema industry (Bollywood).
My objective for a “Under Graduate Certificate Broadcast-Television” is to get involved in such a course which could help me in achieving my goal as the mounting competition among the international and domestic corporations has laid down new rules of the game.

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NOTE- THIS IS NOT FINAL VERSION I'LL EDIT AS MY SENIORS WILL GUIDE N I"LL RE-ARRANGE IT AND PUT IT IN A CLEAN MANNER DON'T WORRY ABOUT FORMAT.

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prokrito

Star Member
Apr 2, 2013
138
5
124
Dhaka
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
Is this SOP or Study Plan.
From My knowledge, SOP is for the student who mail to the professor for getting fund and Study Plan Questionnaire need to apply for Visa.

according to the checklist http://www.canadainternational.gc.ca/singapore-singapour/visas/53_1.aspx?view=d you need to write these questions answer.

Study Plan: Please submit a one page study plan which answers the following questions and includes any other information relevant to the processing of your application:

1. Why do you wish to study in Canada in the program for which you have been accepted?
2. What is your overall educational goal?
3. Why are you not pursuing a similar program in your country of residence/citizenship?
4. How will this program enhance your employment opportunities in your country of residence/citizenship?
5. What ties do you have to your country of residence/citizenship?
6. If it has been more than 2 years since you have left full-time education, please provide your C.V. (résumé)
7. In the case of a minor applicant, what are your reasons for wishing to study in Canada? What is your parents'/guardians' immigration status in their current country of residence?

I have written 660 words according to this format.

Note That: this is for Singapore embassy, I have little knowledge about Indian CHC. But it's pretty sure that its not SOP, it's Study Plan.
 

bali.singh

Hero Member
Jun 19, 2013
440
5
New Delhi
Visa Office......
CHC Delhi
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
App. Filed.......
04/07/2013
IELTS Request
6.5 Overall not less than 6
VISA ISSUED...
31/7/2013
LANDED..........
12Aug2013
1. Why do you wish to study in Canada in the program for which you have been accepted?
Answered.
2. What is your overall educational goal?
Answered.
3. Why are you not pursuing a similar program in your country of residence/citizenship?
Answered.
4. How will this program enhance your employment opportunities in your country of residence/citizenship?
Answered.
5. What ties do you have to your country of residence/citizenship?
Not Answered.
6. If it has been more than 2 years since you have left full-time education, please provide your C.V. (résumé)
Not for my case
7. In the case of a minor applicant, what are your reasons for wishing to study in Canada? What is your parents'/guardians' immigration
Not for my case
 

prokrito

Star Member
Apr 2, 2013
138
5
124
Dhaka
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
No 5 is most important.

Try to show your parents + properties & Job (if you have) as a country tie. You want to serve for your country (which sector mention) by your skills which you will acquire from North American Countries.
 

bali.singh

Hero Member
Jun 19, 2013
440
5
New Delhi
Visa Office......
CHC Delhi
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
App. Filed.......
04/07/2013
IELTS Request
6.5 Overall not less than 6
VISA ISSUED...
31/7/2013
LANDED..........
12Aug2013
prokrito said:
No 5 is most important.

Try to show your parents + properties & Job (if you have) as a country tie. You want to serve for your country (which sector mention) by your skills which you will acquire from North American Countries.
i'll work on it Brother
thank you
i'll appreciate further good advice.
 

paritosh_thanki

Star Member
Jun 28, 2012
149
0
Please contact me on email or on facebook.
I have made strong SOP with my true information. I will deeply help you regarding this as we have same course and same destination.
 

bali.singh

Hero Member
Jun 19, 2013
440
5
New Delhi
Visa Office......
CHC Delhi
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
App. Filed.......
04/07/2013
IELTS Request
6.5 Overall not less than 6
VISA ISSUED...
31/7/2013
LANDED..........
12Aug2013
paritosh_thanki said:
Please contact me on email or on facebook.
I have made strong SOP with my true information. I will deeply help you regarding this as we have same course and same destination.
Facebook/singh.jadpalbali
Mob +91-9013737887 whatsapp
 

bali.singh

Hero Member
Jun 19, 2013
440
5
New Delhi
Visa Office......
CHC Delhi
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
App. Filed.......
04/07/2013
IELTS Request
6.5 Overall not less than 6
VISA ISSUED...
31/7/2013
LANDED..........
12Aug2013
paritosh_thanki said:
^^^ it says wrong link :(

fb/paritoshthanki
Done
 

bali.singh

Hero Member
Jun 19, 2013
440
5
New Delhi
Visa Office......
CHC Delhi
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
App. Filed.......
04/07/2013
IELTS Request
6.5 Overall not less than 6
VISA ISSUED...
31/7/2013
LANDED..........
12Aug2013
==================================Statement of Purpose=====================================
I am writing this letter with a request to re-consider my Visa application which has been rejected by you on grounds that my previous education is not reasonable with the program I have chosen to study at Conestoga College.

As you will find from the attached certificates, I was doing Bachelors in Digital Animation and Visual Effects in Film making (3 year degree course) at Reliance Big Aims Academy, Delhi. After I completed my 1st year in degree course in which I procured the basic knowledge about television broadcasting and while waiting for my results, just out of curiosity I tried and compared the techniques and methods which I had learned to studios here in India in order to be sure that the money, time and energy which I spent was worth it or not. But I came to know that the methods and techniques which I had learned are far obsolete and to get into a good Indian production. Also I was not getting practical demonstrations and apt theoretical knowledge as required.

While talking to overseas students, I found that the skills I had acquired at Reliance Big Aims were not adequate to meet the requirement for advance Television-broadcasting, so I can be up to date in this competitive world. My Mother and I did a lot of research talking to people in the Broadcast/Television industry as well as researching on the internet, According to my research until now, advance specialization Television-broadcasting at Indian Institution does not exist. I wanted to study at institution which gives me advance knowledge and get exposed to international methods. I looked at websites and did comparisons of many reputed colleges for past Six Months. After all of my research I found that the intensive two year curriculum at Conestoga College met all of my requirements.

Conestoga College is highly acknowledged by all the broadcasting offices in India as well. I am confident that I would get the best education from world class faculty at Conestoga College. The mounting competition among the international and domestic corporations has laid down new rules of the game. Also this program has a very versatile course curriculum as it covers most of the aspects of film/television broadcasting industry. When I'll be done with the Certificate at Conestoga college Graduates find employment as videographers, video editors, creative writers, audio and video production personnel, video journalists, performers, directors, sound recordists , as well as all other pre and post production positions. Therefore, I am confident in getting good job offers on my return to India as many big and reputed production companies like Yash Raj Productions, Red Chillies Entertainment, UTV Motion Pictures , EROS International look for technically sound employees because India has one the world's biggest Cinema industry (Bollywood). Also It would help me in achieving my desired position after coming back from Canada as I will be having advanced knowledge and I would have learned the latest and modern ways of broadcasting.
 

bali.singh

Hero Member
Jun 19, 2013
440
5
New Delhi
Visa Office......
CHC Delhi
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
App. Filed.......
04/07/2013
IELTS Request
6.5 Overall not less than 6
VISA ISSUED...
31/7/2013
LANDED..........
12Aug2013
What to add more
??? ??? ???
 

Nadeem_jee

Champion Member
Mar 7, 2010
1,572
7
U.A.E
Visa Office......
ABUDHABI
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
App. Filed.......
28-02-2010
Doc's Request.
30-04-2010
Nomination.....
00-00-00
AOR Received.
30-04-2010/1st AOR
IELTS Request
01-04-2010
File Transfer...
9-06-2010/25-08-2010 2nd AOR
Med's Request
Waiting
Med's Done....
Waiting
Interview........
00-00-00
Passport Req..
Waiting
VISA ISSUED...
Waiting
LANDED..........
Waiting
bali.singh said:
What to add more
??? ??? ???
Congrats for ur visa... do u appeal?? after rejection or applied again???
 

sourabh32

Star Member
Aug 23, 2013
66
2
What should i put in my sop?
M looking for graphic design course in mohawk college.
And i have done my animation diploma from maac new delhi. Can anybody please tell me