Hello,
It is nice to look at your facebook account.
I must first say that I am not a live-in caregiver
I like your letter as you have written it and I also think the numbers will help you to move policy forward. I have read your posting on facebook. It is good as it is coming from the heart and it written by yourself. I think it will benefit from editing to make your position as well as your experiences clearer and a strenghtened paragraph structure.
Also, I wonder if you are working with any advocacy group in Ontario, e.g. the Philippines Women Centre of Ontario or the community alliance on social justice. Not that I am advocating that you use or do not use any of this organizations but I know that the sister of PWC Ontario, which is the Philippine Women Centre of BC, has been able to do a lot of advocacy work in moving policy forward.
Hope this helps.
Thank you,