Job reference Letter validation

[vsgautam]

Dear experienced forum members,

I have received my job reference letter from one of my previous employers and the letter contains the below text, however, I am not sure if this is fulfilling the requirement of jobs and responsibilities (I would be supporting the salary requirement with pay stubs). Also, I am claiming more than 3 years of work exp for this job under NOC 0125 - Other Business Managers but not sure now if this letter supports it. I request you to kindly review and suggest if I should change my NOC, if yes, then which or should I contact my org. again and request them to modify the text?

"This is to certify that Mr. X, a resident of X was employed as a Management Trainee and underwent a management training programme in the Airline, Travel & Tourism Industry with our organization from X to X.

The special focus of the training imparted to Mr. X was in the domain areas of Customer Relationship Management, Revenue Accounting & Revenue Administration."

VSG

 

[vsgautam]

thoughts any one?

 

[Asivad Anac]

You'll need a more exhaustive list of responsibilities than this. NOC 0125 has 8 line items - try and get at least 5-6 responsibilities mentioned in your letter that correspond to the NOC main duties.

You can ghost-write those and provide to your HR if they allow such a thing.

Main duties

Managers in this unit group perform some or all of the following duties:

Plan, organize, direct, control and evaluate the operations of establishments that provide services to business such as management consulting, market research, personnel and payroll services, contact centre services and security services
Plan, develop and organize the policies and procedures of these establishments
Develop action plans, provide expertise in response to client needs, and support and advise project teams
Direct and advise staff in the development and implementation of service quality assessment strategies
Plan, administer and control budgets for client projects, contracts, equipment and supplies
Represent the company within various economic and social organizations
Assist staff with administrative or technical problems
Hire, train and supervise staff.

 

[vsgautam]

You'll need a more exhaustive list of responsibilities than this. NOC 0125 has 8 line items - try and get at least 5-6 responsibilities mentioned in your letter that correspond to the NOC main duties.

You can ghost-write those and provide to your HR if they allow such a thing.

Hi Asivad,

Yes, I contacted the HR again and he has advised to contact my CEO as I was reporting in to him....let's see what he says.

Regards,
VSG

 

[fpaikar]

Hi Asivad my husband had got his duties upto two to three points.We should elaborate it upto 6 will that be okay?

 

[Asivad Anac]

Hi Asivad my husband had got his duties upto two to three points.We should elaborate it upto 6 will that be okay?

Yes. Get in as much detail as possible.