Please guys have a look at my job letter and suggest me any improvement if required. And do tell, is it better to address letter to Canadian high commission or TO WHOM MAY IT CONCERN will be a better option. My boss is agree with both.
To, Date: 23/09/20014
The Canadian High Commission
Diplomatic Enclave
Islamabad, Pakistan.
I am pleased to write this letter to certify that Mr. ____ S/O _____ is working as __________ with this department since _____ as per the personnel file and the office employment record. In this period, he has been a part of various projects of the department.
Mr. ____ is professional, hard worker, innovator and keen in his work. He always works for the best of department, and he has the ability to work as a team leader.
Due to his abilities, we highly recommend Mr._______ to go for higher studies abroad. His studies abroad will be beneficial for this department and the country on his return. We wish him good luck for his brilliant future.
For further information, please do not hesitate to contact the undersigned.
(The letter is being issued on the applicant’s request for his study permit.)
To, Date: 23/09/20014
The Canadian High Commission
Diplomatic Enclave
Islamabad, Pakistan.
I am pleased to write this letter to certify that Mr. ____ S/O _____ is working as __________ with this department since _____ as per the personnel file and the office employment record. In this period, he has been a part of various projects of the department.
Mr. ____ is professional, hard worker, innovator and keen in his work. He always works for the best of department, and he has the ability to work as a team leader.
Due to his abilities, we highly recommend Mr._______ to go for higher studies abroad. His studies abroad will be beneficial for this department and the country on his return. We wish him good luck for his brilliant future.
For further information, please do not hesitate to contact the undersigned.
(The letter is being issued on the applicant’s request for his study permit.)