Dear All,
I would highly appreciate if you could spare few minutes to rate the following essay on band score level. I am taking on IELTS General exam on 7-Jan-12 therefore earliest response would be highly appreciated.
Regards,
Narendra
Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the type of relationship people make ?
Has this become a positive or negative development ?
Technology is becoming an inevitable part of our life and it’s evident enough to see its dominance in our regular routine. Certainly, It is changing the way we communicate with each other. However, various people hold the idea that is negatively affecting our lives. Both the aspects; pros and cons of this revolution is jotted down in this analysis.
Many people believe that technology is severely hampering our social life and they support their idea by adding that, due to the influence of technology we people use the medium like internet and mobile phone for communication instead of meeting in person. Furthermore, such people add that this new method of communication is making us robotic.
However, There are countless people across the world those who believes that this technical revolution is easing the way we interact. Moreover, no one can deny that communication becomes so rapid and effective due to technology. To illustrate this, we can only imagine that if video telephony would have not been invented, we could have not been able to communicate in a such an interactive way where we can see the facial expression of each other. Due to the emergence of technology social networking has gone far away beyond the boundaries where a person from any country can reach to the person from different country in just a flick of the eyes.
To conclude with, I tend to agree that technology is definitely changing our way of communication, but in more of better ways. Therefore, to summarise with, It can be seen that more and more people are inclined towards technology and getting benefited by it.
I would highly appreciate if you could spare few minutes to rate the following essay on band score level. I am taking on IELTS General exam on 7-Jan-12 therefore earliest response would be highly appreciated.
Regards,
Narendra
Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the type of relationship people make ?
Has this become a positive or negative development ?
Technology is becoming an inevitable part of our life and it’s evident enough to see its dominance in our regular routine. Certainly, It is changing the way we communicate with each other. However, various people hold the idea that is negatively affecting our lives. Both the aspects; pros and cons of this revolution is jotted down in this analysis.
Many people believe that technology is severely hampering our social life and they support their idea by adding that, due to the influence of technology we people use the medium like internet and mobile phone for communication instead of meeting in person. Furthermore, such people add that this new method of communication is making us robotic.
However, There are countless people across the world those who believes that this technical revolution is easing the way we interact. Moreover, no one can deny that communication becomes so rapid and effective due to technology. To illustrate this, we can only imagine that if video telephony would have not been invented, we could have not been able to communicate in a such an interactive way where we can see the facial expression of each other. Due to the emergence of technology social networking has gone far away beyond the boundaries where a person from any country can reach to the person from different country in just a flick of the eyes.
To conclude with, I tend to agree that technology is definitely changing our way of communication, but in more of better ways. Therefore, to summarise with, It can be seen that more and more people are inclined towards technology and getting benefited by it.