I just recieved my notes and they read as follows:
I am not satisfied that the applicant would leave canada at the end of their stay as a temporary resident, i note that:
the client is single, mobile, is not well established and has no dependents
The study plan does not appear reasonable given the applicant's employment and education history i note that
the client has previous studies at higher academic level than the proposed studies in canada
the client's proposed studies are not reasonable given their career path
I applied to a student visa last year and after my 3rd refusal i requested the notes.
i applied to study business sales and marketing and i majored in english liteliture before in my homecountry but i didnt graduate.
I am an only male son to my parents and have three sisters
I am financially stable and have over 60k$ CAD in my bank account
I work in a marketing company since 2018
My family doesn't have any assets besides an appartment
all the statements above are provided with government issued letters
I wrote a new letter to respond to the points mentioned above and i need your help rating my respond and maybe you could help me add to it
first (the client is single, mobile, is not well established and has no dependents)
I started by mentioning that i am an only male son to my parents and i procceeded to explain their financial situation and ties to me, as both of my parents are retired and their income has been reduced to less than half and how they can't afford to provide everything to our home including day to day needs plus my sisters' university education and i added that i cannot leave them behind to have a life abroad because they depend on me heavily, i provided to prove this, my parents' government issued retirement certificates and a bank statement of the last 6 months of my personal bank account which all adds up to 60k CAD
I also added a sabbatical leave letter from my employers to prove that i have something waiting for me back home in addition to my family.
the client has previous studies at higher academic level than the proposed studies in canada
the client's proposed studies are not reasonable given their career path
i responded to this that in 2018 after i quit university i went through the marketing and business managing market and gained a lot of experience and found myself enjoying the field which all lead to my unexpected decision to change from english liteliture to business sales and marketing, also, i added that the market is full of unemployed english liteliture graduates and to get into business would mean to compete versus old and big companies in the market.
i mentioned that i would get promoted in my work if i get a diploma or any education related to the field of work and i mentioned that other my colleauges got promoted when they did so.
and i added that im planning to start my own business after a while when i get back home while still working for the current company i work with now.
i'm plannning to attach an emplyment letter from my company stating that i been working for them since 2018 until current date to prove everything i mentioned above and the sabbatical leave.
I mean i hope that wasn't really long and i really hope someone would rate this response and help me make it better and maybe even tell me if there's any mistakes in it
Thank you very much in advance!
I am not satisfied that the applicant would leave canada at the end of their stay as a temporary resident, i note that:
the client is single, mobile, is not well established and has no dependents
The study plan does not appear reasonable given the applicant's employment and education history i note that
the client has previous studies at higher academic level than the proposed studies in canada
the client's proposed studies are not reasonable given their career path
I applied to a student visa last year and after my 3rd refusal i requested the notes.
i applied to study business sales and marketing and i majored in english liteliture before in my homecountry but i didnt graduate.
I am an only male son to my parents and have three sisters
I am financially stable and have over 60k$ CAD in my bank account
I work in a marketing company since 2018
My family doesn't have any assets besides an appartment
all the statements above are provided with government issued letters
I wrote a new letter to respond to the points mentioned above and i need your help rating my respond and maybe you could help me add to it
first (the client is single, mobile, is not well established and has no dependents)
I started by mentioning that i am an only male son to my parents and i procceeded to explain their financial situation and ties to me, as both of my parents are retired and their income has been reduced to less than half and how they can't afford to provide everything to our home including day to day needs plus my sisters' university education and i added that i cannot leave them behind to have a life abroad because they depend on me heavily, i provided to prove this, my parents' government issued retirement certificates and a bank statement of the last 6 months of my personal bank account which all adds up to 60k CAD
I also added a sabbatical leave letter from my employers to prove that i have something waiting for me back home in addition to my family.
the client has previous studies at higher academic level than the proposed studies in canada
the client's proposed studies are not reasonable given their career path
i responded to this that in 2018 after i quit university i went through the marketing and business managing market and gained a lot of experience and found myself enjoying the field which all lead to my unexpected decision to change from english liteliture to business sales and marketing, also, i added that the market is full of unemployed english liteliture graduates and to get into business would mean to compete versus old and big companies in the market.
i mentioned that i would get promoted in my work if i get a diploma or any education related to the field of work and i mentioned that other my colleauges got promoted when they did so.
and i added that im planning to start my own business after a while when i get back home while still working for the current company i work with now.
i'm plannning to attach an emplyment letter from my company stating that i been working for them since 2018 until current date to prove everything i mentioned above and the sabbatical leave.
I mean i hope that wasn't really long and i really hope someone would rate this response and help me make it better and maybe even tell me if there's any mistakes in it
Thank you very much in advance!