How to explain long break in studies help needed

[Saahibmalkani]

My profile
10th 53%
12th commerce 60%
15th commerce 63% 2013
After my 15th i worked in a company for 2 years and have a experience letter
After that 2 years i started working as a assistant store manager in my dads shop from 2015 to 2017
I gave a experience letter signed my my dad
Paid gic 10000$
Paid 1st sem fees 8000$
Rest I mentioned financials will be sponsored by my parents
Applied for global business management in centennial college
Applyed under spp
In sop mentiond the intention to comming back to india with gbm knowledge and expanding my dads business in my home country india

Visa rejected so applied for caips notes,and got reply after a month-
Application reviewed student long break after finishing studies not clearly motivated by further study is not logical progression of studies given this letter of purpose for study reviewed and considered on review of all information I am not satisfied applicant is bona fided student application refused .

I am making a new sop but i am very confused how to explain long break in studies any help ?

 

[immigrant_kane]

My profile
10th 53%
12th commerce 60%
15th commerce 63% 2013
After my 15th i worked in a company for 2 years and have a experience letter
After that 2 years i started working as a assistant store manager in my dads shop from 2015 to 2017
I gave a experience letter signed my my dad
Paid gic 10000$
Paid 1st sem fees 8000$
Rest I mentioned financials will be sponsored by my parents
Applied for global business management in centennial college
Applyed under spp
In sop mentiond the intention to comming back to india with gbm knowledge and expanding my dads business in my home country india

Visa rejected so applied for caips notes,and got reply after a month-
Application reviewed student long break after finishing studies not clearly motivated by further study is not logical progression of studies given this letter of purpose for study reviewed and considered on review of all information I am not satisfied applicant is bona fided student application refused .

I am making a new sop but i am very confused how to explain long break in studies any help ?

how long is the break exactly? this is kinda tricky and I am scared for myself coz I have a break of about 5 years ..but I have work exp from MNCs in the same field that i want to pursue an education in.

I am no expert, but according to me I think it would be good if you could show in ur SOP that ur work exp is inline with the education you want to pursue..

 

[immigrant_kane]

My profile
10th 53%
12th commerce 60%
15th commerce 63% 2013
After my 15th i worked in a company for 2 years and have a experience letter
After that 2 years i started working as a assistant store manager in my dads shop from 2015 to 2017
I gave a experience letter signed my my dad
Paid gic 10000$
Paid 1st sem fees 8000$
Rest I mentioned financials will be sponsored by my parents
Applied for global business management in centennial college
Applyed under spp
In sop mentiond the intention to comming back to india with gbm knowledge and expanding my dads business in my home country india

Visa rejected so applied for caips notes,and got reply after a month-
Application reviewed student long break after finishing studies not clearly motivated by further study is not logical progression of studies given this letter of purpose for study reviewed and considered on review of all information I am not satisfied applicant is bona fided student application refused .

I am making a new sop but i am very confused how to explain long break in studies any help ?

when did u apply for the visa and when did u get a response about rejection from cic?

 

[Saahibmalkani]

Its for 4 years but i worked in that years and also gave them experience letters

I applyed very early and got rejected so i applyed earrly for my caips notes and got it on November 20

Now reapplying for same intake as i have time as colleges will start by 22nd january

 

[pulkitkumar190]

Its for 4 years but i worked in that years and also gave them experience letters

I applyed very early and got rejected so i applyed earrly for my caips notes and got it on November 20

Now reapplying for same intake as i have time as colleges will start by 22nd january

Try applying in Delhi Embassy, they give the result in maximum of 10 days

 

[Saahibmalkani]

Try applying in Delhi Embassy, they give the result in maximum of 10 days

Thats scary what do u guys think my chances are if i make a strong sop and reply to caips properly

 

[deep23]

Thats scary what do u guys think my chances are if i make a strong sop and reply to caips properly

It is the only way you can try.... Give as much reason you can give to support your reason to study