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Final attempt for study permit.

rahul10

Star Member
Oct 19, 2020
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Hi folks,

My visa has been rejected 2 times (SDS Category) for Humber College Post Graduate Diploma - Global Business Management course (may 2020 intake).

Reason (both times) - I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on the purpose of your visit.

I have studied bachelors of business management previously and graduated in August 2019 (77%).
I then worked as a marketing executive for 7 months (October 2019 to April 2020). I am not doing anything since May 2020 to November 2020. I am 22 years old Indian citizens living in India.

1st Filing was done on 27th January 2020 and got refusal on 2nd February 2020
2nd Filing was done on 27th February 2020 and got refusal on 3rd March 2020

After 2 refusals, I applied for caips notes which stated :

GCMS/CAIPS Notes for 1st Refusal -

Applciation reviewed. Client recieved a Bachelor in Business Management (2019). Client wants to attend Global Business Management at Humber College. On review of all inforamtion uncluding PA's previous employment and educational history, their motivation to pusue studies in Canada at this point does not seem reasonable. Study plan submitted is general and I am not satisfied with client's explanation of career benefits. Chosen program at the college level at such an expense is illogical in light of PA's reported scholarly and/or work history. Considering previous academic education, employment history, personal establishments and ties to home country, I am not satisfied that the applicant would be a bonda fide student in Canada and would depart Canada at the end of the perio authorised for stay. Application refused.

GCMS/CAIPS Notes for 2nd Refusal -

Application, documents submitted and GCMS history reviewed. Previous refusal noted. Applicant wants to attend Humber College Institute of Technology and Advanced Learning for Global Business Management. Considering applicant's extensive education and previous work experience in the same field, I am not satisfied that applicant would not have already achieved the benefits of this program. It is not evident why applicant would study this program at sch great expense considering applicant already possess a higher level of qualification. Client has a Bachelor of Arts with Honours in Business Management. I am not satisfied that this is a reasonable progression of studies, which raises concerns regarding applicant's intended purpose in Canada.
Not satisfied on balance that applicant is a genuine student who would respect terms of authorized stay, nor that S-1 is not facilitate entry to Canada for other unknown reasons. Application refused.

My IELTS is 7.0 with 6 and above.

I have considered changing my institute and I currently have offer letter from University of New Brunswick MBA program | September 2021 at Fredericton campus.

University of new brunswick MBA does not offer a specialisation but the core modules in a particular field (marketing, finance, HR etc) can be selected in second year and I intend to choose elective modules related to Marketing.


Question 1 - How to convince the Visa Officer this time?

Question 2 - How to justify 7/8 months gap? I have a legitimate Marketing executive offer letter from a company, dated 12th October 2020.

Queestion 3 - What additional documents can I attach to demonstrate family ties, home ties? (I am the only child) | (During 2nd attempt of visa filing, I attached Sponsorship affidavit, Father's ITR, Father's Salary Slip, Provident Fund, An employment resumption letter from my previous organisation)
This time, I plan to attach CA Report which states 3 properties under my father's name, available funds, father's annual salary and jewellery.

Question 4 - What is the ideal time for visa filing for September 2021 intake?

Question 5 - I have never travelled out of India so how can I justify my travel history.

I humbly request you peeps to help me out or connect me to someone who can.
 
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bongoman

VIP Member
Dec 3, 2014
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The issue seems to have been the course Humber GBM is a known nonsense course used for PGWP only, so hopefully the MBA will improve your chances, make sure your SOP explains how the course helps your career back home.
 

rahul10

Star Member
Oct 19, 2020
133
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Thanks bud. I agree with you. I am planning to hire a professional SOP writer. I will elaborate my case to him/her in depth and accordingly they will draft one. If you have any other suggestion, kindly comment on that.
Take care.