Refused by Abu Dhabi need your support
Hi, I am Farah, from Abu Dhabi, I did MBA in Marketing from Lahore. I applied via consultant in CDI College Toronto for Higher Secondary diploma in HR and I received Rejection from CHC Abu Dhabi stating that;
You have not satisfied me that you would leave Canada at the end of your stay in reaching this decision; I considered several factors, including;
• Your travel history
• Purpose of visit
• You have not provided documents demonstrating the relationship between you and your sponsor.
• Your personal assets and financial status “my paternal uncle is my sponsor he is a goldsmith”
Now I made following changes please guide me is this enough for me or should I change more things.
• Now I am getting admission in PGD – HR in Humber College for September 2012 Session.
• Regarding my Travel history I visited Pakistan twice during my stay in UAE and I will mentioned this on excel sheet [its been 16 months in am in UAE].
• I will rewrite my SOP.
• Regarding Sponsor…. I applied for Bank loan here in UAE and hopefully I will get AED 60,000/- [RS. 1,500,000/-] and I have AED 30,000/- already in my account [Rs. 750,000/-]. Total AED 90,000/- and equivalent to Pakistani Rupees 2,100,000/- is this enough for one year post graduation diploma?
• There is a 10 Marla plot on my name net value Rs. 1,700,000/- attaching this documents as well.
• Does there any need to attached or mentioned uncle Bank statement or other supporting documents