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gaggy

Hero Member
Jun 8, 2011
472
26
Amritsar
Visa Office......
New Delhi
To,
The Visa Officer
Canadian High Commission
Chandigarh

Statement Of Purpose

Introduction:

I am xxx S/o xxx, resident of xxx, India.
I have done 10th in 07 followed by advance diploma in computer application in 08.Then I did senior secondary in humanities stream with mathematics,economics and computer applications as my course contents.my senior secondary examination got completed in 2010 with score of 59%.To enhance my skills in hardware i did advance diploma in computer hardware which got completed in 2011. I have secured 6.0 bands in IELTS. It was during my advance diploma course that i was introduced to networking however detailed knowledge and practical exposure was missing.

COMPUTERS DRIVE THE 21st-CENTURY ECONOMY,SO A COMPUTER SYSTEMS TECHNICIAN-NETWORKING DIPLOMA IS EXCEPTIONALY MARKETABLE.

I believe that the statement of purpose should be an appropriate blend of thoughts and reasons. Hence i would choose to remain sincerely honest and candid about what i am and what i want to become.i have chosen to complete my specialization from canada because of a number of reasons which are as follows- this is a fact that canada has the best research output and the best technology in the whole world. I want to enhance my knowledge and also want the global exposure and the interaction with the people of different ethnicities, which we get in the canada, are undoubtedly unique. And above all, the education system of canada has a wide variety of flexibility and freedom of choices.

In pursuit of these goals, i decided to apply to the computer system technician-network system to the mohawk college, hamilton,ontario.moreover this course is related to my previous study and my keen interest in computers and networking lead me to opt for this course.impressed by its research facilities like coordinated science laboratory and internship work opportunities for full-time students in this program.the department web site too revealed an expert faculty involved in extensive research in the area of network system, under whom i would consider it a privilege to learn and which has served to strengthen my resolve to study at mohawk college. The cooperative program that is available in this college will provide me a platform through internship to expose myself to the conditions that i will face when i will enter into IT world.

FINANCIAL SPONSOR

my father and my mother who are government employee would fund my education and stay in canada. I would also take advantage of education loan from nationalized bank in india,

PLANS AFTER COMPLETION OF THE COURSE:
after completing my course i am sure my career would touch great heights in the field of information technology, i hope to bring with me a strong grasp of fundamentals in networking and web scripting, and aptitude for learning and teamwork and a zest for challenges. Before coming to india, i would like to take with me, in addition to knowledge of networking, a network of strong and lasting relationships with my teachers and fellow students.

I am confident that i will live-up to the high standards set by mohawk college and hope to be a part of the class of 2011.

So, please consider my application so that i can start my studies on time.

Thanks and Regards

xxxxxxxx

Passport No.xxxxxxx
 

Nightrocker

Hero Member
Feb 27, 2011
806
30
Canada
Category........
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
App. Filed.......
12-04-2011
Med's Request
08-06-2011
Med's Done....
13-06-2011
VISA ISSUED...
24-07-2011
LANDED..........
23-08-2011
Re: Check Out My SOP.........what U think abt it!!!

gaggy said:
To,
The Visa Officer
Canadian High Commission
Chandigarh

Statement Of Purpose

Introduction:

I am xxx S/o xxx, resident of xxx, India.
I have done 10th in 07 followed by advance diploma in computer application in 08. Then I did senior secondary in humanities stream with mathematics,economics and computer applications as my course contents.my senior secondary examination got completed in 2010 with score of 59%.To enhance my skills in hardware i did advance diploma in computer hardware which got completed in 2011. I have secured 6.0 bands in IELTS. It was during my advance diploma course that I was introduced to networking however detailed knowledge and practical exposure was missing.

COMPUTERS DRIVE THE 21st-CENTURY ECONOMY, SO A COMPUTER SYSTEMS TECHNICIAN-NETWORKING DIPLOMA IS EXCEPTIONALY MARKETABLE.

I believe that the statement of purpose should be an appropriate blend of thoughts and reasons. Hence I would choose to remain sincerely honest and candid about what i am and what i want to become. i have chosen to complete my specialization from canada because of a number of reasons which are as follows- this is a fact that canada has the best research output and the best technology in the whole world. I want to enhance my knowledge and also want the global exposure and the interaction with the people of different ethnicities, which we get in the canada, are undoubtedly unique. And above all, the education system of canada has a wide variety of flexibility and freedom of choices.

In pursuit of these goals, i decided to apply to the computer system technician-network system to at the mohawk college, hamilton, ontario. Moreover this course is related to my previous studies and my keen interest in computers and networking lead me to opt for this course.impressed by its research facilities like coordinated science laboratory and internship work opportunities for full-time students in this program.the department web site too revealed an expert faculty involved in extensive research in the area of network system, under whom i would consider it a privilege to learn and which has served to strengthen my resolve to study at mohawk college. The cooperative program that is available in this college will provide me a platform through internship to expose myself to the conditions that i will face when i will enter into IT world.

FINANCIAL SPONSOR

my father and my mother who are government employee would fund my education and stay in canada. I would also take advantage of education loan from nationalized bank in india,

PLANS AFTER COMPLETION OF THE COURSE:
after completing my course i am sure my career would touch great heights in the field of information technology, i hope to bring with me a strong grasp of fundamentals in networking and web scripting, and aptitude for learning and teamwork and a zest for challenges. Before coming to india, i would like to take with me, in addition to knowledge of networking, a network of strong and lasting relationships with my teachers and fellow students.

I am confident that i will live-up to the high standards set by mohawk college and hope to be a part of the class of 2011.

So, please consider my application so that i can start my studies on time.

Thanks and Regards

xxxxxxxx

Passport No.xxxxxxx
 

gaggy

Hero Member
Jun 8, 2011
472
26
Amritsar
Visa Office......
New Delhi
Re: Check Out My SOP.........what U think abt it!!!

I already submitted my application on 3 aug............the lines which u cutted cant do anything about it now........ And the lines which u underlined its all in capital letters on sop..............just typed on my cell 2 share with u guys thats y its all in same manner.
 

Nightrocker

Hero Member
Feb 27, 2011
806
30
Canada
Category........
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
App. Filed.......
12-04-2011
Med's Request
08-06-2011
Med's Done....
13-06-2011
VISA ISSUED...
24-07-2011
LANDED..........
23-08-2011
Re: Check Out My SOP.........what U think abt it!!!

gaggy said:
I already submitted my application on 3 aug............the lines which u cutted cant do anything about it now........ And the lines which u underlined its all in capital letters on sop..............just typed on my cell 2 share with u guys thats y its all in same manner.
Ok buddy wish you best of luck. See you in Mohwak soon!!! :)
 

Ali Durrani

Star Member
Jun 5, 2011
90
0
124
peshawar
Visa Office......
CHC islamabad
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
App. Filed.......
20thmay
Med's Request
30thJune
I suggest you add all ur family information as much as u can in the 1st para and then later start with educational bak ground in ur 2nd para...

Thats what My pro Consultant tought me to do and is the best way to represent sop to VO
 

harman narang

Star Member
Jul 21, 2011
75
1
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
gaggy said:
To,
The Visa Officer
Canadian High Commission
Chandigarh

Statement Of Purpose

Introduction:

I am xxx S/o xxx, resident of xxx, India.
I have done 10th in 07 followed by advance diploma in computer application in 08.Then I did senior secondary in humanities stream with
mathematics,economics and computer applications as my course contents.my senior secondary examination got completed in 2010 with score of 59%.To enhance my skills in hardware i did advance diploma in computer hardware which got completed in 2011. I have secured 6.0 bands in IELTS. It was during my advance diploma course that i was introduced to networking however detailed knowledge and practical exposure was missing.

COMPUTERS DRIVE THE 21st-CENTURY ECONOMY,SO A COMPUTER SYSTEMS TECHNICIAN-NETWORKING DIPLOMA IS EXCEPTIONALY MARKETABLE.

I believe that the statement of purpose should be an appropriate blend of thoughts and reasons. Hence i would choose to remain sincerely honest and candid about what i am and what i want to become.i have chosen to complete my specialization from canada because of a number of reasons which are as follows- this is a fact that canada has the best research output and the best technology in the whole world. I want to enhance my knowledge and also want the global exposure and the interaction with the people of different ethnicities, which we get in the canada, are undoubtedly unique. And above all, the education system of canada has a wide variety of flexibility and freedom of choices.

In pursuit of these goals, i decided to apply to the computer system technician-network system to the mohawk college, hamilton,ontario.moreover this course is related to my previous study and my keen interest in computers and networking lead me to opt for this course.impressed by its research facilities like coordinated science laboratory and internship work opportunities for full-time students in this program.the department web site too revealed an expert faculty involved in extensive research in the area of network system, under whom i would consider it a privilege to learn and which has served to strengthen my resolve to study at mohawk college. The cooperative program that is available in this college will provide me a platform through internship to expose myself to the conditions that i will face when i will enter into IT world.

FINANCIAL SPONSOR

my father and my mother who are government employee would fund my education and stay in canada. I would also take advantage of education loan from nationalized bank in india,

PLANS AFTER COMPLETION OF THE COURSE:
after completing my course i am sure my career would touch great heights in the field of information technology, i hope to bring with me a strong grasp of fundamentals in networking and web scripting, and aptitude for learning and teamwork and a zest for challenges. Before coming to india, i would like to take with me, in addition to knowledge of networking, a network of strong and lasting relationships with my teachers and fellow students.

I am confident that i will live-up to the high standards set by mohawk college and hope to be a part of the class of 2011.

So, please consider my application so that i can start my studies on time.

Thanks and Regards

xxxxxxxx

Passport No.xxxxxxx


Best of luck virre !! hope u get ur visa soon ...
 
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Gagan111

Guest
It's good man............hope u get visa ............good luck
 
Dec 8, 2012
1
0
Hi gaggy, I would like to ask you how hard was college until now. I also want to apply to the computer system technician-network system, and your informations would be very useful. Thx
 

harpreet470

Hero Member
Jul 3, 2012
498
16
App. Filed.......
08-04-2020
Interview........
Waived
VISA ISSUED...
01-12-2014
LANDED..........
14-12-2014
Wish u all the best... the only thing i think is that your SOP is little lengthy..


All the best... you will get your Visa soon :)
 

jay031

Star Member
Nov 3, 2011
81
4
harpreet470 said:
Wish u all the best... the only thing i think is that your SOP is little lengthy..


All the best... you will get your Visa soon :)

he got rejected not once but twice, why don't you understand a simple thing, your SOP is simply a wastage of time.