Hi,
My study permit has been refused twice all because of purpose of visit
This is my GCMS note:
[PA is single, 26 years old. Travel to Japan only in 2015. Applying to attend Humber for 2 year diploma in Interior Decorating. Last formal studies completed Bachelor of Management Science in 2013. Worked as video editor, product manager and since 2014 as Planner. No satisfactory explanation as to how proposed studies in Canada would benefit PA. Does not appear to be logical progress from previous studies and work experience. I am not satisfied that PA is a bona fide student and would leave CDA at the end of any authorized stay. Application refused]
So this time i changed my major to Global Business Management, and tried to make my sop more convincing.
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My study permit has been refused twice all because of purpose of visit
This is my GCMS note:
[PA is single, 26 years old. Travel to Japan only in 2015. Applying to attend Humber for 2 year diploma in Interior Decorating. Last formal studies completed Bachelor of Management Science in 2013. Worked as video editor, product manager and since 2014 as Planner. No satisfactory explanation as to how proposed studies in Canada would benefit PA. Does not appear to be logical progress from previous studies and work experience. I am not satisfied that PA is a bona fide student and would leave CDA at the end of any authorized stay. Application refused]
So this time i changed my major to Global Business Management, and tried to make my sop more convincing.
------gonna rewrite it-------