Anyone Accepted on second attempt - please share SOP

[Cattravel]

Anyone whose study permit was accepted on the second attempt wants to share their SOP with me?

My study permit was refused base on family ties and on county of residence.

 

[Yangz]

people are rejected for different reasons. SOP from other people cant perfectly match your case.

 

[Cattravel]

If I submit a stronger SOP, will it help, can a SOP alone go a long way?

 

[Yangz]

If I submit a stronger SOP, will it help, can a SOP alone go a long way?

SOP should be written reasonably and convincingly based on your own situation. and talk more about solid fact, less about dream and ambition.

 

[Cattravel]

SOP should be written reasonably and convincingly based on your own situation. and talk more about solid fact, less about dream and ambition.

Thanks for the insight