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hello, did you guys stopped reviewing essays here? :-(:(:(:(

hello guys, I tried the following topic and I appreciate if you give me your comments. @marosa @cansha I would be thrilled if you can give me a score band so i know where I am standing right now:) Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help...

You are being such a good mentor to me @marosa thanks a lot. I revised the essay and here you are. truly appreciated for your time When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what...

guys can you please tell me what score does this essay get?

Hello guys, I did write an other essay, kindly let me know what are you thoughts about it thanks ;-) @cansha @marosa When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree...

Hello there, thanks for the comments, I thought that new technology is not confined to editing picture only, but also small camera with high resolution, or camera with ability to zoom or etc. Considering that, the filming will be accessible conveniently. BTW, I think that you might be right...

hello every one, I saw the topic here and I tried writing it out. I was hesitating about the structure, please guide through:-) @cansha @marosa In the past, photography was used to real people and places; however, because of technology, today you cannot trust what you see. It is a negative...

Well explained and useful :) Thanks @marosa

Thanks for you practical comment :)

here you are ;-) Youngsters have a natural tendency to follow behaviors of people of their own age group through their social interactions. Although this might have possible side effects under certain circumstances, I believe since essential social and communication skills will be achieved...

Hello everyone and goody day, here I am with another essay. Your comments will be truly appreciated @marosa @cansha Young people are often influenced in their behaviors and situations by others in the same age. This is called “peer pressure”. Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages...

OMG,, you can not believe how much happiness you brought to my family with your comment. We are going to apply for a PR, we do need high score. At least I know I am moving forward in a positive direction. I will keep working on my flaw and re-post another essay Thanks for your support.

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Dear Guys, Could please review this essay ;-) Many People think that every individual is responsible for their happiness, but some people believe there are other external factor that influence it. Discuss both views and give your opinion. It is considered by a wide variety of people that...

َAny of the knowledgable members here can help me with my essay please?

Dear Marosa, Thanks for your insightful tips, I reall am working on them. here is my new writing, can you take a look at it? Thnks :) I want to know what is its score band? In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their pwn country. Nowadays, they have more...

I am sorry I missed the question. In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new home there. What is your opinion about this? While it is...

Hello guys, I hope everyone here is safe and healthy, Marosa, I tried to practice your tips and here you can see another task 2 response, could you please give me your feedback. Thanks a lot ;-) In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the...

Hello every body and good day! Here people are advising me to read band 7 and higher essays, do any of you guys know a book, a website or sth to find these kind of essays? Thnks :)

Thanks for your time Marosa. I will keep practicing :-)