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i totally agree that writing 2 ideas in two paras is a lot easier, but my confusion is that the e2language.com tutot Jay suggests two double-idea paragraphs in adv/disadv and problem-solution essay. And i have watched other videos which suggest the same approach. I guess in problem-solution...

This is new to me. if we write one adv/disadv, then are we supposed to write one problem and solution, even though the prompt uses plural?! Can anyone with experience of getting good bands with this approach confirm it?? It would be a great help since it gets hard to write 4 ideas and keep a...

you have really done a good job with corrections!

oh, man! so sorry to hear it.

As I pointed out earlier, you may lose points in grammar and punctuation in general. Specifically in this essay, you only discussed one adv. and disadv. although prompt used plural of both the words. In adv. para, your central idea was the learning of survival skills which you mention in the...

Hi. Can someone evaluate this piece? For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree. For hundreds of...

I have been struggling to come up with strong arguments too. Other than that, need to insert some complex sentences in my essay to score high on grammatical range.

Hi. I think you need to work on grammar and punctuation; comma and semi-colon are the most-commonly used punctuation marks so try to familiarize yourself with their uses. Then there was some poor choice of words and the arguments were not explained with strong explanation.

Hi. I am new in this group and have been struggling with IELTS writing myself. I need 7 bands in it. As for your essay, I have put some comments in parentheses right beside the potential problems. Reading the prompt, I felt like it wanted us to discuss whether children should take part in group...