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    Writing Task 1 Academic - Band 7+

    This essay handles to topic very well, answers the question directly, 2 causes and a couple possible solutions. Clear opinion. Well-organized. You also have a good range of grammar with just a couple minor issues. Here's some tips to focus on vocabulary though. You have a wide range of...
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    Writing Task 1 Academic - Band 7+

    To ZigZag85 - Just a couple of points quickly: the task isn't phrased in an IELTS style. Probably more like 'Some people think that young people should be encouraged to move away from home when they become adults. Other people say that it is better for them to remain with their family for as...
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    Writing Task 1 Academic - Band 7+

    First of all, a true IELTS task will not be phrased with just a question: 'Should teenagers...? ' IELTS tasks start with a statement and then a question. So it might be phrased as: Teenagers should work part-time during high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? It is very important...
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    Writing Task 1 Academic - Band 7+

    Your response is well-organized but better arguments could be found. The last point about taxes is the best one. Some good vocabulary but a few awkward phrases (double-edged sword - trite and overused by IELTS candidates), (irremediably - wrong use) etc. Grammar is strong with a good variety...