So I'm going to be honest. It's a poorly written petition and it also doesn't have an MP's support. I don't see this petition going anywhere or having any kind of impact.
For a petition like this to have a chance of succeeding, you want to find an MP who is willing to support the petition and then launch the petition as a House of Commons petition. The petition also needs to be rewritten to be more fact based and specific in what action is being requested. Recommend reading through petitions on the House of Commons site to see examples.
Good luck.