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Visa got rejected

Msbrar

Star Member
Jul 14, 2019
192
62
India
Category........
Visa Office......
New Delhi
App. Filed.......
25 May 2019
To,
Case Processing Officer,
Citizenship and Immigration of Canada
Re: Application for Study Permit Made Outside of Canada
Dear Sir/Madam,
I, Adil Butt, the resident of ,Pakistan,
write this in regards to my application of study permit made outside of Canada.
I have received an unconditional letter of acceptance from Durham College of Applied Arts
& Technology, Oshawa, Ontario. I have been accepted into the September 2019 Session
of, “Info Systems Security- Computers & Networking” Program. I am now applying for my
study permit after receiving confirmation through Letter of Acceptance issued and have
already paid the fees to reserve my seat as required by College of CDN 8,372.38.
I wish to pursue the program of Computer & Networking Security in Canada. The length of
Program is one year, which I believe is the ideal choice for my career aspirations and
background. I have done my Graduation from University of Gujrat in Information
Technology from Pakistan with good percentage. This program will give me the
knowledge and the experience for aspiring to excel in my field and develop my career
further in Computer Networking and Security. I request you to please grant me a study
permit so that I may improve my resume and increase my employability before returning
to the tough economic situation present in my country, Pakistan.
I wrote my IELTS test on April, 27 2019 and scored overall score of 7.0 in the Academic
stream. My IELTS test results and all my educational documents have been enclosed with
the application package as per the CIC document checklist, for your kind perusal to
process my application for Study Permit.
I have enclosed the fees payment receipt paid for the program with Letter of Acceptance
from the college. I have amount equivalent to CAD 17000$ in my account in Bank Alfalah
which is sufficient amount of funds for my stay and survival in Canada. I would like to add
that two of my maternal uncles, will also be supporting me for my stay and tuition fees in
Canada, I have attached their letters of support & financial proofs for your referral as well.
Please rest assured that I am a bona fide student, I will keep myself enrolled in the DLI
and will leave Canada at the end of the completion of my studies & my authorized stay in
Canada. I hereby request you to issue me a Study Permit so that I may commence my
study in Canada. Please contact me if you have any further questions or concerns or if
you require any other documents or information for the successful processing of this
application.
Thanks in advance.
Sincerely,
Name: Adil Butt


Please check if my SOP is okay
Hi ,why u share information your uncle support u .it means you will never come back in your home county,
 

Msbrar

Star Member
Jul 14, 2019
192
62
India
Category........
Visa Office......
New Delhi
App. Filed.......
25 May 2019
Anyone can please share sample of SOP please.
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE

Name:****** Singh
Course: Global Business Management (GBMG)
Level of study: Level 1
Course fees: 20000 Dollars
College:(name and address college )

Objective:
My goal is to define my so far attained skills with global education and global working environment.

My back ground so far:
I completed my secondary and senior secondary exams in year 20**and 20**respectively from CBSE Education Board. After that, I did job in BPO (Business Processing Outsource) sector as a Customer Care Associate, in Global Services Pvt. Ltd London from April 20** to August 20**.Then, from 2nd November 2011 to July 2013, I worked as Senior Customer Care Executive, in Bpo Services Ltd. In USA.In next phase, I have completed my graduation degree (Bachelor ) from (University name and address )that remained from 20**to 201**After this,

My family:
My family has got eight members, including me. My father is a farmer. My elder brother is also*****+++

My course and college:
(Course name) (college campus address)
In my words, global business management level 1 is the way for me to justify and modify my so for attained work experience at the work place. During my job days, I have observed and realized the importance of team work, objectives fulfilments through targets, planning, and role of management. Though, I have a notion that higher qualification is must to upgrade the qualifications in this globalize and industrialised scenario. To do so I wish to do this program in business management course as the contents cover skills and knowledge relevant to career in business, management and marketing. The post graduate certificate in business management level 1 is perfect to produce professional individuals with a sound knowledge of business practices. This programme covers a range of business areas as financial management, international management and leadership research, organizational strategies, business and marketing communications, public relations, and business laws.

Course outcome:
I have a notion that this course will help me to understand the business marketplace and to make a career in management with an understanding of business management theory and practice. By this course, I will be introduced to the principles of management, and through study and real world examples, I will learn how to apply these concepts to address problems and opportunities, both domestically and internationally. I will definitely have an edge in taking decisions and to conclude.
Moving ahead I have opted Loyalist College as it seems credible due to having campuses at two places i.e. Brampton and ***in CANADA. In this college better and highly qualified staff availability is there as per different subjects needs, and most importantly the courses are as per Student Direct Stream (SDS) guidelines. I have chosen the campus at ****, a beautiful city and located close to Library, Parks, Supermarkets, Banks, Post Office and other amenities. I hope the ideal learning atmosphere, with having managerial employment opportunities for (college name)graduates.

Future Prospectus:
After completing this course, I will have chances to go for post study work permit to have training and other expertise. Next, the jobs available are as marketing manager, Finance manager, direct marketing management official and sales manager etc. In parallel line, I will have a chance to do further higher studies course from reputed colleges in Canada or MBA from any global based institute/University in India or abroad.

Why Canada:
The Canada qualification is globally accepted and renowned and it is internationally approved. I have a notion that the qualification in Canada will be strongly effective, not only because of international acceptance and the best faculties, but the mingling environment is also an added advantage. As I have got to know that this country is crime free, safe and clean and it is also a feature to understand and analyze about organized system of Canada and these skills are enormously beneficial; I think these traits can be better understood for individual personality and skills improvement. Further, I would say that, my father has sufficient funds in the process to cherish my aim to get international qualification, before being occupied in a good job and better social life in India.
For fulfilling my dreams, I need yours support.


( Name applicant )

(Mobile number)
 

Adilbutt67

Full Member
May 27, 2019
20
2
My Maternal uncle (Mamu) lives in canada and he is supporting me for my study. is it okay to mention this in SOP ?
 

Adilbutt67

Full Member
May 27, 2019
20
2
Okay ... I have talked to the canada government officials about the refusal . They have said I have already completed my graduataion from Pakistan and now I am applying for graduate diploma I already have higher degree.
Now kindly help me about how can I can convince the visa officer about the course .
 
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VaishOptimistic

Hero Member
Jun 19, 2019
508
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Okay ... I have talked to the canada government officials about the refusal . They have said I have already completed my graduataion from Pakistan and now I am applying for graduate diploma I already have higher degree.
Now kindly help me about how can I can convince the visa officer about the course .

They have already informed u why they have refused ur file.... Choose a higher degree course which is relevant to ur work or studies.... In between how come u interacted with them???? I am excited to know
 

Adilbutt67

Full Member
May 27, 2019
20
2
They have already informed u why they have refused ur file.... Choose a higher degree course which is relevant to ur work or studies.... In between how come u interacted with them???? I am excited to know

My uncles lives in Canada .. he met with member of parliament there she gave him appointment to meet one of the officer who explained the case to him.
 
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